Stiletto Heel Steel Tip Boots
Crushing Henry's ego one night.7 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I love this. I love how you led the reader on to assume the speaker was a female. Or the reader wondered. Some such as I hoped the speaker was a male, possibly a transgender. This will get the readers' attention. I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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I love this. I love how you led the reader on to assume the speaker was a female. Or the reader wondered. Some such as I hoped the speaker was a male, possibly a transgender. This will get the readers' attention. I am voting for this.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and contest support.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Lance, WOW!!! I loved your story told...very well described...and very well written...
when I first saw the picture...I wasn't sure what I was
getting into...held my interest from start to finish...
sometimes you just have to take a stand in life...
good luck...love your story told...and the picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Hi Lance, WOW!!! I loved your story told...very well described...and very well written...
when I first saw the picture...I wasn't sure what I was
getting into...held my interest from start to finish...
sometimes you just have to take a stand in life...
good luck...love your story told...and the picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your review and comments. Sometimes you just have to write on the wild side.
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soooooooo true...and your sooooo welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author is a good story teller. The scene of conflict was well described. The argument between the two men were a bit nasty, but good for this scene. Tossing the drink on Henry's face was dramatic, but maybe appropriate for this scene.
Overall a very good story.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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The author is a good story teller. The scene of conflict was well described. The argument between the two men were a bit nasty, but good for this scene. Tossing the drink on Henry's face was dramatic, but maybe appropriate for this scene.
Overall a very good story.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your detail comments and review. Much appreciated.
Comment from nor84
Sponsor did not put the required word count up front, but it is there at the bottom of the announcement. Required word count is 500 words and entry has fewer than that. You may want to check it with your computer's word processor and make some adjustments.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Sponsor did not put the required word count up front, but it is there at the bottom of the announcement. Required word count is 500 words and entry has fewer than that. You may want to check it with your computer's word processor and make some adjustments.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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I raised the question within the contest whether it was up to 500 or exactly 500 and got no reply. However, the contest creator reviewed my work and gave me 6 stars so I thought it was ok. To be safe I edited the work up to exactly 500 words. Thanks.
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You can't depend on a reviewer, even the sponsor. The word count is there in the announcement, sponsor just has it at the bottom.
Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
As the creator of this prompt, I'm going to say I hope you win because It came off very film noir and I could see it in my head. Seriously I don't know if I could top if I enter
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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As the creator of this prompt, I'm going to say I hope you win because It came off very film noir and I could see it in my head. Seriously I don't know if I could top if I enter
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Wow. Thanks so much for the compliments and the many shiny stars in your rating of my work. I actually had fun writing this and was surprised by the lack of participation by other writers. As the creator you already knew this had to be a gay relationship but to others it had a surprise twist which you may have missed. Thanks again.
Comment from bnair
I could imagine every word of it. And the feelings. How a bad relationship changes you. And always deep inside knowing who you truly are. Well written.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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I could imagine every word of it. And the feelings. How a bad relationship changes you. And always deep inside knowing who you truly are. Well written.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments and review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, I had to take another look at that picture, I hadn't noticed the boots!! LOL. That was a brilliant story of the boots, and you portrayed it masterfully with him walking down the street, dressed to kill, or thrill! Well done, the twist was amazing. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Well, I had to take another look at that picture, I hadn't noticed the boots!! LOL. That was a brilliant story of the boots, and you portrayed it masterfully with him walking down the street, dressed to kill, or thrill! Well done, the twist was amazing. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your comments and review Sandra. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it.
