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Viewing comments for Chapter 114 "Hey Boo!"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
Crooning to the moon
At midnight
To woo a cute boo
Perfectly done for the contest and using a word I have not associated with a love. I adore the difference in areas of the world.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
Thanks, Barb. I know. It's a weird word to use as a term of endearment. But "bad" has come to mean "good." And now "dope" is used for "good." LOL! When people like something, you hear them yell, "Dope!" It's so silly.
Comment from
lyenochka
I like your internal rhymes in the first and last lines. I had to look up in Urban Dictionary what a "boo" was but I guessed it in the context of "woo a boo." Cute! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
Weird word, isn't it? Funny how jargon changes as one ages. Thank you for the review, lyenochka.
Comment from
Jay Squires
Oh, I just caught it. That it was an acrostic lune! An added dimension to the difficulty level. Congratulations. Can I assume the artwork was original? Wow! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
Yeah, well, sorta. I copied a picture on a postcard. I liked the art style, so I copied it. Thank you for the review, Jay.
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