The Footprints
Start the Story With These Sentences contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
A short story that continues to ignite the imagination well after the story ends. The image you created is perfect for the story. I can see why a 15 foot gorilla would be pissed off in a snow storm.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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A short story that continues to ignite the imagination well after the story ends. The image you created is perfect for the story. I can see why a 15 foot gorilla would be pissed off in a snow storm.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Donald V. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Comment from LyndaS
Abominable Snowman...HAHAHA! This is a great little story that satisfies the prompt well and the story flows beautifully with a beginning, middle and a funny ending. Your art is awesome and compliments the story very well. This is excellent flash fiction that should do well in the booth. Well done! Lynda
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Abominable Snowman...HAHAHA! This is a great little story that satisfies the prompt well and the story flows beautifully with a beginning, middle and a funny ending. Your art is awesome and compliments the story very well. This is excellent flash fiction that should do well in the booth. Well done! Lynda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the big sixer, Lynda. You made my day. I was actually going at this from a humorous angle when I wrote it. The abominable snowman. Lol. What, is this a children's Christmas TV special? Haha.
I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, Lynda. I'm glad you liked the piece. I hope you have a great night Thank you again.
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Comment from AnnieDawn
Your story is well written right down to the end of the last paragraph. The word "clean" puts it in the teen category while the rest of the story sounds very professional. Good job on the picture and the story.
beast bit Tom's head clean off his shoulders.(drop the word "clean")
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Your story is well written right down to the end of the last paragraph. The word "clean" puts it in the teen category while the rest of the story sounds very professional. Good job on the picture and the story.
beast bit Tom's head clean off his shoulders.(drop the word "clean")
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Annie. I took out the 'clean' just for you. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and suggestion. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great night.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I gasped three times during your story. What a magnificent example of tension and horror showing up in the span of just a couple hundred words. The build is fantastic. "...fifteen-foot tall beast snatched him out of the snow, lifting him right up to its face." Keep writing this genre...you really excel at it. I wish I had a six star!
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I gasped three times during your story. What a magnificent example of tension and horror showing up in the span of just a couple hundred words. The build is fantastic. "...fifteen-foot tall beast snatched him out of the snow, lifting him right up to its face." Keep writing this genre...you really excel at it. I wish I had a six star!
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and the big six offer, Shauna. I really appreciate the kind comments. I'm glad you liked my little tale. I hope you have a great evening.
