Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Aiona,
This poem tells us what the pandemic has done to change our lives and the meaning of words. Zoom is now a way to communicate and not just to see better.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020

Thanks, Joan. Any suggestions for improvement?

reply by dragonpoet on 05-Dec-2020

Don't mention it, Aiona Not that I can see.
Joan

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I am sorry I dont know what the new meaning of zooming is, guess it is my age. But as a contest entry it is perfectly done in the 5-7-5 format required. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020

Hi, Barb! "Zoom" is a phone app that one can use to video-conference. But people have been using it to meet up with family and friends now, since the lockdown. There are a lot of videos on YouTube that show people accidentally moving the camera and revealing that they aren't wearing pants.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hahaha! I stay in my leggings for Skype calls. If in person, I would put on a skirt over. Cute way of describing the kind of internet interactions these days. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020

Thanks, lyenochka. I was inspired by your winning script.

Comment from sammielwf

Excellent

Aiona,
I am officially sitting here on my couch laughing my proverbial butt off.
( But I am wearing pants).
What a delicious commentary on today....
Maybe someone should come up with a new line of clothing called Zoom wear.
Good job here.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020

Mm...Zoom Wear. I like that idea. Thanks for the review, Sammielwf

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

Ha, ha. I enjoyed this short little one, which was quite suggestive. It was also quite humorous, and an excellent contest entry. Good luck in the voting. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020

Thanks, Susan. I was inspired by lyenochka's Zoom-ing script.