Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 99 "Zoom In"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Aiona,
This poem tells us what the pandemic has done to change our lives and the meaning of words. Zoom is now a way to communicate and not just to see better.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Aiona,
This poem tells us what the pandemic has done to change our lives and the meaning of words. Zoom is now a way to communicate and not just to see better.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Joan. Any suggestions for improvement?
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Don't mention it, Aiona Not that I can see.
Joan
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I am sorry I dont know what the new meaning of zooming is, guess it is my age. But as a contest entry it is perfectly done in the 5-7-5 format required. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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I am sorry I dont know what the new meaning of zooming is, guess it is my age. But as a contest entry it is perfectly done in the 5-7-5 format required. Best of luck.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2020
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Hi, Barb! "Zoom" is a phone app that one can use to video-conference. But people have been using it to meet up with family and friends now, since the lockdown. There are a lot of videos on YouTube that show people accidentally moving the camera and revealing that they aren't wearing pants.
Comment from lyenochka
Hahaha! I stay in my leggings for Skype calls. If in person, I would put on a skirt over. Cute way of describing the kind of internet interactions these days. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Hahaha! I stay in my leggings for Skype calls. If in person, I would put on a skirt over. Cute way of describing the kind of internet interactions these days. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thanks, lyenochka. I was inspired by your winning script.
Comment from sammielwf
Aiona,
I am officially sitting here on my couch laughing my proverbial butt off.
( But I am wearing pants).
What a delicious commentary on today....
Maybe someone should come up with a new line of clothing called Zoom wear.
Good job here.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Aiona,
I am officially sitting here on my couch laughing my proverbial butt off.
( But I am wearing pants).
What a delicious commentary on today....
Maybe someone should come up with a new line of clothing called Zoom wear.
Good job here.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Mm...Zoom Wear. I like that idea. Thanks for the review, Sammielwf
Comment from Susan X Smith
Ha, ha. I enjoyed this short little one, which was quite suggestive. It was also quite humorous, and an excellent contest entry. Good luck in the voting. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Ha, ha. I enjoyed this short little one, which was quite suggestive. It was also quite humorous, and an excellent contest entry. Good luck in the voting. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thanks, Susan. I was inspired by lyenochka's Zoom-ing script.