Me as a Writer
A writer does not give up, even if not always a success.3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Me As a Writer, presented with a 5-7-5, seventeen syllable formatting, and reminds all of us that some are diamonds and some are stones.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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This senryu, Me As a Writer, presented with a 5-7-5, seventeen syllable formatting, and reminds all of us that some are diamonds and some are stones.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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That's for sure, but with each one diamond or stone hopefully we learn a bit more. Thanks for the read and comment.
Comment from Mark D. R.
You created a terrific verse for this contest. It is a motto that easily follow in my own short style poems. Believe it or not, I scratch my poems in a journal similar to the illustration you chose, but without a clasp. I also have scraps of paper sitting next to my reading chair (-;
Very nice overall presentation! I too favor no caps and centered text lines for my 5-7-5s.
Mark
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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You created a terrific verse for this contest. It is a motto that easily follow in my own short style poems. Believe it or not, I scratch my poems in a journal similar to the illustration you chose, but without a clasp. I also have scraps of paper sitting next to my reading chair (-;
Very nice overall presentation! I too favor no caps and centered text lines for my 5-7-5s.
Mark
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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My methods are similar. Thanks for the read and encouraging comments.
Comment from Patricia Cammish
Interesting post. I'm not sure about the word ' earns' here ... not 'creates' or 'produces' ?
Simple but also good that it can be read in different ways
Some not so
Or
So still willing
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Interesting post. I'm not sure about the word ' earns' here ... not 'creates' or 'produces' ?
Simple but also good that it can be read in different ways
Some not so
Or
So still willing
Comment Written 01-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020
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Thanks for the read and the comments; I will consider the suggestions.
