Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

You have described writer's block quite successfully. And the picture reinforces how we often feel. But you were able to get the right words out in your poem. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020

Thank you very much for your kind review and good wishes.

reply by Anne Johnston on 30-Nov-2020

You are welcome

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Writer's block--you nailed it--murky stream of thought/cruel muse--alliteration in MMMM. Can't quite get the imagery of chasing an elusive inkwell. Good luck.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020

Thank you very much for your kind review and good wishes.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

I'm afraid this writer is in the depths of despair over the block situation. It certainly is a "heavy" piece, but it is a respectable contest entry, keeping to the content and form required.

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020

Thank you very much for your kind review and good wishes.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Great photo, and a well-written poem for this contest. Obviously your muse is not mocking you at the moment. The first two lines are very poetic. Best wishes.

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.