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Where Are All The Children

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A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.

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Comment from Ulla
Exceptional
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Whoa, Misty, this is getting more sinister by the minute. I'm not at all surprised than one from the police force could be involved. There are rotten apples everywhere, and what better cover than being a police officer. I like where this story is going, and the witness and victim keeps well hidden. I like this story. Very well written. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for such a fantastic, inspiring review. The vigilante isn't about to spare anyone, least of all the higher-ups. She's good at keeping under the radar, perhaps a little too good for the sergeant's liking, lol.
    Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from BethShelby
Excellent
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I am enjoying your writing and looking forward to more. This lady is very smart to be able to carry out her purpose without being caught. It is interesting that a member of the force is one of the ones who is part of the sex trafficking ring. It doesn't surprise be that this could happen.

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for such sweet words. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. She is very smart. She knows how to escape the watchful eye. She's going to get cockier, play more games with the sergeant as her confidence grows, lol. The ones in power are the worst because they have the resources to cover up, often get by with their crimes.
    Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.