Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 100 "Death of a Sails Man"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
5 total reviews
Comment from mkflood
Well aiona thank you for selecting it..I make available over 1000 drawings of wide range of topics available to my fellow Fanstory members. yes I'm a member of both FAN sites. Cute and sweet story you created. Our works does work well together. Great overall on the story. If you get the chance look me up on YouTube (mkflood) there will discover numerous cartoon music videos of wide range of music and stories or topics. Some will make you laugh..some will make you tap your foot..some will make you think and some might even make you cry..the admission is free. Thanks again for selecting my work and great job on the story overall.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Well aiona thank you for selecting it..I make available over 1000 drawings of wide range of topics available to my fellow Fanstory members. yes I'm a member of both FAN sites. Cute and sweet story you created. Our works does work well together. Great overall on the story. If you get the chance look me up on YouTube (mkflood) there will discover numerous cartoon music videos of wide range of music and stories or topics. Some will make you laugh..some will make you tap your foot..some will make you think and some might even make you cry..the admission is free. Thanks again for selecting my work and great job on the story overall.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thanks. :) It's a true story, I'm sad to say. I lost my racing idol that day.
Comment from lyenochka
That's a great nonet poem! You didn't force rhymes (which are not required) but instead, stuck to the message. The "sailsman" (great play on the well known play title!) gave up his love of winning sailing races for the love of his life! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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That's a great nonet poem! You didn't force rhymes (which are not required) but instead, stuck to the message. The "sailsman" (great play on the well known play title!) gave up his love of winning sailing races for the love of his life! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thanks! Love of his life indeed. I kinda wonder if there isn't a wedding in the works for next year.
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very Good. I like the play on words in your title, Sails versus Sells, Solid
tight work with a emotional blast. The art work supports the work very well. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Very Good. I like the play on words in your title, Sails versus Sells, Solid
tight work with a emotional blast. The art work supports the work very well. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Taurus.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those that fall in love with the sea and sailing rarely like to be on land, unless of course they are called by love as here in your sweet romantic nonet, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Those that fall in love with the sea and sailing rarely like to be on land, unless of course they are called by love as here in your sweet romantic nonet, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Yes, I see where this could be a metaphor. In any case, it is meaningfully done and the message received. He fell, hook line, and sinker, and that changed everything.
Ralf
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Yes, I see where this could be a metaphor. In any case, it is meaningfully done and the message received. He fell, hook line, and sinker, and that changed everything.
Ralf
Comment Written 27-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
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Thanks, Ralf.