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Accident in the Crosswalk

5-7-5 Poem Contest Entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from greyson ernst
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

lol really good job i may have just joined fanstory but im no noob but i have no recommendation good luck
keep righting stay safe


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Grayson. I sure didn't plan on seeing one of those for this silly piece. Not many people on here appreciate my twisted sense of humor. Lol. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous write, friend. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend and thank you again.
reply by greyson ernst on 28-Nov-2020
    no problem would you mind checking out mountain acrostic
Comment from Pantygynt
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A touch of cruelty to bikers here I think. I imagine the photograph was carefully contrived and not from life at all. Clever though. Slever use of those seventeen syllables.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Thank you, Pantygynt. No, I wasn't being cruel to bikers. I ride myself. Just goofing around with the prompt with a silly joke that he'd be arrested for not complying to social distancing rather than manslaughter for running someone down. Lol. Yes, I created the picture myself. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have a great weekend.