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Assassinate Me a Thriller contest entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
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Oh dear, the darker side of life has got to Sesame Street. It does seem highly likely that this is the version kids of today are watching... bad language, infidelity, revenge, murder... a true indication of everyday life.
Luckily we adults get to laugh at your comedic portrayal of it. A worthy winner over my more serious take on modern life... congratulations!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the great review and congrats, Lisa. Yeah, I love killing off childhood icons. Lol. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. I hope you have a great night and thank you again.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from sammielwf
Excellent
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Oh Mystery Author,
This little doosie of a an assassination thriller sure brought out the animal instincts of you as a writer. I can not argue that based on their piggish behaviors...they both had it coming.
I enjoyed this story from start to explosive ending. Well crafted story line and wickedly funny characterization.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Sammielwf. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent
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A stunner--gripping--masterfully narrated--POV of ruthless killer--dark humor--wickedly clever snark. Priceless punchline. Good luck--this may be a winner. (hyphenate fat-ass)

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Elizabeth. I added the hyphen in there. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment from roof35
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I am so mad I do not have six stars to give you. While the language is a bit rough, the whole thing with the Muppets tie-in had me laughing out loud. Best of luck in the contest. I think this is a winner.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review and big six offer, Roof. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have yourself a great night.