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lotus life, death, & reemergence

contemporary Haiku (latched in muddy ponds)

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Comment from sammielwf
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Dear Anonymous Writer,
This was an informative write as well as good solid piece for the contest. You taught me something about
the lotus I did not know. Thank you for shay your creativity through this poem.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Yes, that fact was unknown to me too. Having just read the novel, The Red Lotus, I wanted to learn more about its habitat and meaning. Different colors have other nuances, especially in Eastern philosophy.
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet.. you have your first vote!

I confess I had no idea that every night the lotus submerged only to resurface so majestically the next day ..

I know in eastern philosophies it represents purity and rebirth ...which makes sense even more to me... now I know its daily cycle.

My mamma practised yoga since she was a teen ( years before it became a western thing) and I know the lotus position ..

... a pose taken when meditating and the yogi is cross-legged and each foot is place on the opposite thigh

There is a lot of health benefits also in the lotus position

It opens hips , stretches ankles and knees gives you good posture just to name a few.

I enjoyed the read and I learnt something of interesting ..

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2020
    Ciao Tempeste!

    It oft seems you award me votes for my poetic efforts. But, I really cherish your reviews and commentary.

    Sorry, but my body could never do that lotus position (-;
Comment from roof35
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You followed the rules and penned an excellent entry for the five/seven/five contest. I did not know lotus flowers disappeared at night. Your illustration pairs perfectly.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Judy,

    Yes, I did not know that either. I just read a novel that had Red Lotus in its title, so I discovered that fact and the meanings of other lotus colors - fascinating!

    BTW ... thanks for your review and stars (-:

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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How clever nature is and these are special blooms and the stagnant pond never bothered a lotus flower, they bring life to what otherwise would be a dull view, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2020
    Dolly,

    The idea for the lotus cane from a novel with Ted Lotus on its title. As such I was curious about the flower and discovered this unusual factoid about their rebirth each day. THANKS for your review and stars.