The Last Three Words
Love Bites 5-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a clever and creaive write for the 'Love Bites' poetry contest. You choice of illustration goes well to accentuate your write. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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This is a clever and creaive write for the 'Love Bites' poetry contest. You choice of illustration goes well to accentuate your write. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Equestrik. I really appreciate generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great night,
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Ron
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. Man you got a chuckle out of me and a big old smile. Technically sound, good syllable count, the ending just great. The art work is spot on. A credit to the 5-7-5 genre. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Very good. Man you got a chuckle out of me and a big old smile. Technically sound, good syllable count, the ending just great. The art work is spot on. A credit to the 5-7-5 genre. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Taurus. I sure didn't expect one of those for this silly thing. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece. Have yourself a great night and Thanksgiving and thanks again.
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Us 5-7-5 writers got to stick together. You deserved the six.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Thank you for giving me a good laugh. I didn't expect that last line. The photo you chose was perfectly paired, and the two together was very creative. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you for giving me a good laugh. I didn't expect that last line. The photo you chose was perfectly paired, and the two together was very creative. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Lorraine. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
