Gladly Welcomed
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Gladly Welcomed
by Mark Schardine
Hello, Mark,
Some men got it too easy. One may say, mommy's boy. They adore their mothers and marry women like their moms. Thank you, not for me. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done :)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Gladly Welcomed
by Mark Schardine
Hello, Mark,
Some men got it too easy. One may say, mommy's boy. They adore their mothers and marry women like their moms. Thank you, not for me. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done :)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
And what kind of kiss is that? Sorry, my warped mind wasn't sure how to process that. I thought this was a terrific poem especially since (not sure if that was your intent) it leaves room for clarity. Very nicely done and creative.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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And what kind of kiss is that? Sorry, my warped mind wasn't sure how to process that. I thought this was a terrific poem especially since (not sure if that was your intent) it leaves room for clarity. Very nicely done and creative.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and insight.