Miss Billie Part~3
1,400 words. Mr. Little is back to help.15 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 1400 word fiction speaks about Mr. Little and his activities expressed through a freely flown and psychologically thoughtful taletelling, fostered by a few but realistic dialogues, and good orderly plot development with curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This 1400 word fiction speaks about Mr. Little and his activities expressed through a freely flown and psychologically thoughtful taletelling, fostered by a few but realistic dialogues, and good orderly plot development with curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
To live like that would be a dream, Mike, but that's not possible now. The old bones won't let me. Dear Miss Billie, what a diamond she is. Those who have lived what some call, the hard life, did live contented lives. We miss such a lot in our 'civilised' lives. I'm really enjoying your story, and can't wait for more. Well done, my friend! Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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To live like that would be a dream, Mike, but that's not possible now. The old bones won't let me. Dear Miss Billie, what a diamond she is. Those who have lived what some call, the hard life, did live contented lives. We miss such a lot in our 'civilised' lives. I'm really enjoying your story, and can't wait for more. Well done, my friend! Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Hi, Sandra. Thank you for your kind words and for searching out the other stories!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
This is great little story. I laughed with you mentioned taking off the mask. That much have taken some explaining. Miss Billie wouldn't have any idea what that is all about. I enjoyed the story.
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This is great little story. I laughed with you mentioned taking off the mask. That much have taken some explaining. Miss Billie wouldn't have any idea what that is all about. I enjoyed the story.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Hi, Beth. Mr. Little explained in the last chapter, and Miss Billie just shrugged it off. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Oh, this is a most lovely story! Miss Billie is a woman to remember, and Mr. Little is a great example of human kindness. I thoroughly enjoyed this writing!
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Oh, this is a most lovely story! Miss Billie is a woman to remember, and Mr. Little is a great example of human kindness. I thoroughly enjoyed this writing!
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Hi, Rebecca. Thank you for your kind words. I've got to catch up on Nellie Jo.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Mary Charles
I really like your character development, Mike. Knowing there are other Miss Billie stories makes me want to read more. Is there a political statement lurking in there? [turning to other gods, forcing his wrath] -- this makes me think you might be preaching just a bit. And that's fine when it's subtle enough not to turn off our readers. Thank you so much for letting us in!
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I really like your character development, Mike. Knowing there are other Miss Billie stories makes me want to read more. Is there a political statement lurking in there? [turning to other gods, forcing his wrath] -- this makes me think you might be preaching just a bit. And that's fine when it's subtle enough not to turn off our readers. Thank you so much for letting us in!
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words! I'll be by to read.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
