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polar bear in frigid air

fun rhyme in 1-6-1

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Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with an apt theme as we head into cold days of winter.
You have the three rhymes cleverly done.
Ironically, the polar bear's fur keeps her/him quite warm.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    THANKS Robert for your encouragement for this short syllable contest.

    Interesting Internet factoid:

    Even though polar bears look white, their hair is really made of clear, hollow tubes filled with air. Scarring or residue on the fur can cause the ?white? fur to appear to human eyes as cream colored, yellow, or even pink in the Arctic light.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    THANKS Robert for your encouragement for this short syllable contest.

    Interesting Internet factoid:

    Even though polar bears look white, their hair is really made of clear, hollow tubes filled with air. Scarring or residue on the fur can cause the ?white? fur to appear to human eyes as cream colored, yellow, or even pink in the Arctic light.
Comment from equestrik
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This is cleverly rhymed. The polar bear is a majestic and beautiful creature. The picture is beautiful and really speaks to the majesty of the bear as well as the region they live in.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    Yes, they are indeed majestic creatures. Sadly, the changing environment threatens and rthe polar bears? habitat
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
    Yes, they are indeed majestic creatures. Sadly, the changing environment threatens and reduces the polar bears? habitat.

    Thanks for your encouragement for my short syllable entry.