The Zombie Poet
Zombie 5-7-5 contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
There is fun animation as we use our imagination to picture what that would look like. Upon pausing, we might see ourselves in this scenerio and actually laugh. That would be me on some days. The hard consonants and s's create the mood. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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There is fun animation as we use our imagination to picture what that would look like. Upon pausing, we might see ourselves in this scenerio and actually laugh. That would be me on some days. The hard consonants and s's create the mood. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Liz. Yes, every once in a while, when checking the contest page, I sometimes feel like this. Haha. I really appreciate the generous stars, Liz. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's funny,. I love the presentation. You get my vote.LoL
Good luck
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's funny,. I love the presentation. You get my vote.LoL
Good luck
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review and support, Gypsy. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. I hope you have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
I have been a member for two years now and two months but I have never yet participated in a horror , zombie contest it s just not my thing
That said , reading your entry made me laugh ..
Horror combined with some humor directed towards fanstory members worked with me , so I gave you my vote .. you now have 6 !
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Ciao poet!
I have been a member for two years now and two months but I have never yet participated in a horror , zombie contest it s just not my thing
That said , reading your entry made me laugh ..
Horror combined with some humor directed towards fanstory members worked with me , so I gave you my vote .. you now have 6 !
Keep safe!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, T. I don't really care too much for the horror stuff on here either. Usually I'll just try to mock in some way. Lol. This was actually directed to the boring contests the site brings up for daily prompts rather than to the members. But sometime I feel the same way after reading a few entries. Haha.
I really appreciate the gracious stars and vote, T. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great day.
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Ron
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I agree ... off late the prompts have been the same at least in the poem sector..
Countless 5-7-5 on nature , seasons ..
To be fair, the writing prompts have doubled but I?m not that good at writing down my thoughts when the minimum word count has to be more than 100 ( biggrin)
Keep safe!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was an interesting piece of work. It's a shame that the zombie doesn't like the writing prompts. You selected a great piece of artwork to accompany your writing. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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This was an interesting piece of work. It's a shame that the zombie doesn't like the writing prompts. You selected a great piece of artwork to accompany your writing. Best of luck!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Monica.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Best way to start the day is with laughter and a smile sparked by good humor. This was genius. I'm an avid watcher of zombie flicks and participant here. So, I especially liked this one. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Best way to start the day is with laughter and a smile sparked by good humor. This was genius. I'm an avid watcher of zombie flicks and participant here. So, I especially liked this one. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Cybertron. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you had a chuckle over this silly piece. I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment from lancellot
This is cute, but are Zombies just the walking dead? Perhaps a slight rewrite is in order, to avoid that reaction from readers with they go: Wait... zombies are dead.
But, the theme is one many can relate with. Well done on the entry.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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This is cute, but are Zombies just the walking dead? Perhaps a slight rewrite is in order, to avoid that reaction from readers with they go: Wait... zombies are dead.
But, the theme is one many can relate with. Well done on the entry.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thanks for the great review, Lancellot. All the ridiculous movies I've ever seen title them "the undead". lol I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
