Comment from sammielwf

Excellent

Harry,
Beautiful Creation is just that- Beautifully written and accompanied by a beautiful photograph.
The lines "symmetry in ice" and Creator's unique pattern were a wonderful sequence together. (Both design images and I like that)
This was well done Harry.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020

Thank you for the read and encouraging comments.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-line poem, Beautiful Creation, uses fourteen words and describes the God-carved crystalline snowflake which drops two form a blanket.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020

Thank you for the read and review.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a terrific poem. I like how you share the beauty of a snowflake and transition it into your faith. Your poem, with just two lines, says so much. Great job.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for your read and encouraging comment.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

There is a symmetry of rhythm too in this, which I found very pleasing, based on five syllables in three out of four cases, an even in the third group the naturally unstressed syllables fade into the distance maintaining the rhythmic feel of the whole.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020

Thank you so much for your read and encouraging comments.