Comment from
Anne Johnston
Great story and well written. It flows easily from start to finish. I like how even though you did not speak their language, the kind Indian family saw your need and ministered to it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
Thank so much for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.
Comment from
Susan X Smith
This is a touching story about a youth who was actually recued by Indians, who might have been an enemy. I enjoyed reading it and it fulfills the specifications of the writing prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
Thank so much for taking the time to read and review. Much appreciated.