A Hopeful Future
Never give up on...9 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has a nice note of hope. It states the harsh realities of our life. This becomes a universal poem. This will appeal to readers. They will identify with your message. You are correct about the dreams. So many have had to put them on hold. We are never too old to realize our dreams. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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This has a nice note of hope. It states the harsh realities of our life. This becomes a universal poem. This will appeal to readers. They will identify with your message. You are correct about the dreams. So many have had to put them on hold. We are never too old to realize our dreams. Well thought out.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from equestrik
Love this presentation with such a positive write along with a positive picture to go with it. I hope our frustrations will help us to create a new and better 'normal'. This is really a nice entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Love this presentation with such a positive write along with a positive picture to go with it. I hope our frustrations will help us to create a new and better 'normal'. This is really a nice entry for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you, I really appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Nonet Poetry writing prompt contest. Good nonet format.
I share your positive outlook. 2021 will be much better than 2020.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Nonet Poetry writing prompt contest. Good nonet format.
I share your positive outlook. 2021 will be much better than 2020.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thanks for reviewing my poem....I'm keeping my fingers crossed for 2021. :)
Comment from RodG
I truly welcome the OPTIMISTIC OUTLOOK of your nonet. The Speaker gives us all hope a normal life will return and reminds us that keeps constant watch over us.
You put a smile on mt face this morning. Rod
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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I truly welcome the OPTIMISTIC OUTLOOK of your nonet. The Speaker gives us all hope a normal life will return and reminds us that keeps constant watch over us.
You put a smile on mt face this morning. Rod
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reading. I just know in my heart that everything will be ok, it's only a matter of time. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about the virus that kept us all captive now for months seem to be kept alive by people who want to control the world and make us believe we should stop living normal lives.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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A very well-written Nonet about the virus that kept us all captive now for months seem to be kept alive by people who want to control the world and make us believe we should stop living normal lives.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I am never tooooo fond of the nonet style of poetry. Unfortunately, in my opinion, people often just use the syllable count to post a series of random thoughts - that don't even always remain cohesive OR make much sense.
I enjoyed the fact that this was not at all true of this piece. Kudos!
Your syllable counts are just right and the end rhyming scattered throughout the poem offers a nice change of pace. The message was clear - and one I agree with - as a matter of fact, I just posted a similar message this morning. (Great minds!)
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I am never tooooo fond of the nonet style of poetry. Unfortunately, in my opinion, people often just use the syllable count to post a series of random thoughts - that don't even always remain cohesive OR make much sense.
I enjoyed the fact that this was not at all true of this piece. Kudos!
Your syllable counts are just right and the end rhyming scattered throughout the poem offers a nice change of pace. The message was clear - and one I agree with - as a matter of fact, I just posted a similar message this morning. (Great minds!)
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, I really value your opinion. :)
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How sweet!
Comment from WriterHeather
This nonet poem is very well written. This seems like a very hard peice to write but you have done a beautiful job with it. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest. I think you will do very well
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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This nonet poem is very well written. This seems like a very hard peice to write but you have done a beautiful job with it. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest. I think you will do very well
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review 💜
Comment from LisaMay
I don't entirely share your optimism just yet but it is a nice dream to aspire to... and that is always the start to making it happen. With a strong will and belief in God it is all possible. Your poem expresses this hope well in the rather difficult nonet form.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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I don't entirely share your optimism just yet but it is a nice dream to aspire to... and that is always the start to making it happen. With a strong will and belief in God it is all possible. Your poem expresses this hope well in the rather difficult nonet form.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thanks for reading. If I don't maintain this hopeful attitude, I'll go crazy..lol. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)
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Keeping upbeat sure can be hard at times. x
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is a very good job on this Nonet style of writing. You have some rhyme in there too which adds to the theme. I find this style difficult to write to but you have aced it. Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This is a very good job on this Nonet style of writing. You have some rhyme in there too which adds to the theme. I find this style difficult to write to but you have aced it. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you, I haven't written many of these but I like the challenge. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
