Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

This is just lovely and says so much in such a brief amount of language. The photo pairs perfectly. May all parents inspire their little ones to dream big and expand.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor

Exceptional

Beautiful picture, beautiful poem. That baby is just too, too cute, and in the praying position. OMG. Sure hope that is the way my children feel about me. I did try to inspire them, worked sometimes, but other times not. Good luck with the contest, but I"m sure you will do well.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020

Thanks so much! I hope to win. I'm crossing my fingers. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for the six stars! :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-It's nice to hear your
parents inspire you,
and you believe in yourself
as a result.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020

Thanks! I hope that I win. I'm crossing my fingers. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-Nov-2020

You are very welcome.

Comment from George Santhosh

Excellent

Inspiration and belief are the emotions you chose I see. Glad to know you have supportive parents.

Correction:
Add a comma after 'achieve'. "Parents inspire me to achieve my dreams come true" as a single sentence is wrong

All the best
George

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020

Thanks! I have fixed the mistake. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!