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Colour Makes Life Brighter

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3 total reviews 
Comment from rhonnie69
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

CIAO TEMPESTE: Congrats on your success with this poem. You beat me by one vote. I didn't realize that you were a contestant...until I saw the results. Wow. In contests...you're just beating me up, huh, Miss # 1 Poet. (biggrin) Tempeste, didn't you and I unite our wits and win a contest together...namely, "Diversity?" I love everything about that poem. And you know why. God bless you, Tempeste. Ciao. Cordially :rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
    Ciao Rhonnie ..

    you need to check your e:mail ..(I posted this morning)

    ...also your fan post and reviews.

    I voted for your lovely poem ( biggrin)

    ....Trump is taking up all your time .. ( biggrin)

    I?m glad I added your review for diversity in the note section ... while it was in voting booth posters enjoyed your insight ..

    Ciao!
reply by rhonnie69 on 18-Nov-2020
    CIAO TEMPESTE: I'm glad that everything worked out okay . I thank you for your vote. Yes I need to check my email. I shall do that now. Again...thank you. Ciao. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from robyn corum
Excellent
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Dear Mystery Writer,

Really interesting poem about a sad and colorless world. You give a lot of examples of what we'd be missing and I'd prefer not to go there. Ick.

The only negative comment I have is when the font changes - that part is really, really hard to read.

Thanks and good luck!


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you for your kind response ..

    Re font: are you referring to the last verse ??

    I made an edit on my iPhone and some how the last verse finished up in smaller print..

    I didn?t think it was that noticeable.. I will open PC and correct .

    This is the issue you are pointing out, right?
reply by robyn corum on 16-Nov-2020
    Yes. It's not quite the last verse - it's right before that. Looks like that portion may be in Impact font or something. It's hard to read because of the size. Thanks
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you for letting me know .. I appreciate the help .

    Take care!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    I adjusted the print from impact to Ariel hopefully it is clear now and all the same ..
    Thank you for the helpful input !

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    PS: I hope you liked the video I provided below in note section ( smile)
Comment from George Santhosh
Excellent
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I loved you brought in the different hair colours into the narration. Also "colours feed our souls" is something which I liked :)

Suggestion:
* Without colours flowers -> Add comma after colours
* It's a mean of expressions -> means of expression

Cheers,
George

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the kind review .. I have added the ...s... and I will place the comma after the word colours as soon as I receive a second review and the poem is not listed anymore.

    The print is in white so I have to temporarily but it in black and I m working on my iPhone which makes it hard .. I don t want to risk to edit parts of the poem in the process ( biggrin)

    Thanks!





reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    I finally added the comma and also adjusted the print which another reviewer commented on.

    Thanks again for the helpful input.

    Hope you enjoyed the video below