Renga Two
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Allure of Nectar"multi-author book number two
15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
We have a hummingbird on our deck, and the bees cannot resist it either! Thank you for adding your 7-7 couplet to the Renga book, along with the vivid picture and colorful text. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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We have a hummingbird on our deck, and the bees cannot resist it either! Thank you for adding your 7-7 couplet to the Renga book, along with the vivid picture and colorful text. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this short one. Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from RGstar
Lovely...love the image, love the imagery. The colours and words intermingle well.
A short poem...more or less your trademark nowadays, yet, how well you write them. Always a joy to read because you can tell your heart is in it.
Bravo.
Have a great evening.
RG
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Lovely...love the image, love the imagery. The colours and words intermingle well.
A short poem...more or less your trademark nowadays, yet, how well you write them. Always a joy to read because you can tell your heart is in it.
Bravo.
Have a great evening.
RG
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share some thoughts. I enjoy these shorter pieces - but actually am looking forward to penning a few longer ones over the next couple of weeks. I appreciate your feedback, as always.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not all bees can collect nectar June, I learned this writing my insect book, although most bees do, you brought their activity to life here, love Dolly x
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Not all bees can collect nectar June, I learned this writing my insect book, although most bees do, you brought their activity to life here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
Comment from Debbie Pope
June, this little chapter is so sensual--even alluring. The image and pink color make it very appealing, but your words are perfect as well. I like the use of "honey bee--not just bee or bumblebee. Small things like that can make all the difference to me.
The nectar is also symbolic of many alluring things in life that people can't seem to resist.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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June, this little chapter is so sensual--even alluring. The image and pink color make it very appealing, but your words are perfect as well. I like the use of "honey bee--not just bee or bumblebee. Small things like that can make all the difference to me.
The nectar is also symbolic of many alluring things in life that people can't seem to resist.
Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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So glad you got the depth of these two short lines! Many things in life can be alluring to us human bees as well! Thanks for taking the time to offer your insights.
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
Yours is a visually beautiful poem. The photography is startling. What a great accompaniment to your words.
"Allure" is a wonderful, potent word. Who among us, person, animal or insect, can resist an "allure so strong."
It is our nature as living beings to be allured to things, some good, some bad. In this case, the nectar will be satisfying to him and I'm glad for that. What I hate are the times in life when living being are lured into things not good for them.
Nice couplet.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Yours is a visually beautiful poem. The photography is startling. What a great accompaniment to your words.
"Allure" is a wonderful, potent word. Who among us, person, animal or insect, can resist an "allure so strong."
It is our nature as living beings to be allured to things, some good, some bad. In this case, the nectar will be satisfying to him and I'm glad for that. What I hate are the times in life when living being are lured into things not good for them.
Nice couplet.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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So glad you got the depth of these two short lines! Many things in life can be alluring to us human bees as well! Thanks for taking the time to offer your insights.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written couplet about the alluring string nectar that the honey bee cannot resist. A good addition to the multi-author Renga book that seems to keep on going strong.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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A very well-written couplet about the alluring string nectar that the honey bee cannot resist. A good addition to the multi-author Renga book that seems to keep on going strong.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
Well done June June, it's good to see you helping with a worthwhile project of Gypsy, and really there couldn't be anyone better than you doing it. Well done my friend, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Well done June June, it's good to see you helping with a worthwhile project of Gypsy, and really there couldn't be anyone better than you doing it. Well done my friend, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your input, as always.
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Well done
Comment from Gloria ....
Now is this most fetching, June. The bee looks like he's found a sugar daddy for sure. Excellent colour choices and a story of natural attraction.
Thank goodness for those busy bees and superb contribution to the Renga book. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Now is this most fetching, June. The bee looks like he's found a sugar daddy for sure. Excellent colour choices and a story of natural attraction.
Thank goodness for those busy bees and superb contribution to the Renga book. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your input, as always.
Comment from Jay Squires
You've turned your simple two line 7-7 poem into a work of art with your poem font color the same as the more prominent color in the accompanying picture. Your words enhance the overall effect. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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You've turned your simple two line 7-7 poem into a work of art with your poem font color the same as the more prominent color in the accompanying picture. Your words enhance the overall effect. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your input.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Just read Gypsy's haiku--this is a fine segue! Bold presentation, vivid pink with yellow accents--sugg: make text large and bold so as to hold its own with stunning pic.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Just read Gypsy's haiku--this is a fine segue! Bold presentation, vivid pink with yellow accents--sugg: make text large and bold so as to hold its own with stunning pic.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your input, as always.