Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Virtual Vigilantism"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
These are the things you wish you could do to predators like this. So many turn out to be people you would never suspect. What makes people this way? Well done as always.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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These are the things you wish you could do to predators like this. So many turn out to be people you would never suspect. What makes people this way? Well done as always.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a kind review and such encouraging words. I'm sure the police get very frustrated probably threatened this and more. I know I would. Their brains have to be wired wrong or short circuit to even think of such a thing.
Thank you again for all your support, encouragement, and friendship. I always means the world to me. Take care.
Comment from Mia Twysted
What must she be thinking to find her old sergeant naked and bound. I love how you just keep the reader at the edge of their seats. I can't wait to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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What must she be thinking to find her old sergeant naked and bound. I love how you just keep the reader at the edge of their seats. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad you're enjoying this. I'm sure it'd be rather unnerving seeing someone you admire being accused of something so heinous.
Thank you again for all your help, support, kind words, and friendship. It always means the world to me. Take care.
Comment from Cindy Warren
This vigilante is going to keep the cops busy. Too bad they can't castrate the bastards. I'd be all for that. There's no cure for the monsters. They usually don't do much time, and they do rape again. Perhaps she needs a partner who can do the job.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This vigilante is going to keep the cops busy. Too bad they can't castrate the bastards. I'd be all for that. There's no cure for the monsters. They usually don't do much time, and they do rape again. Perhaps she needs a partner who can do the job.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review. It is a shame. Put that on the web as a warning to all lol. Are you volunteering to be her partner? LOl.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship, and encouragement. It always means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mistydawn.
When bad people spend their time doing bad things, they open the doors to all kinds of evil. Once in a while it backfires and turns on them. One could make the case that is what is happening here. Some people think the only way to justice is to administer it themselves.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Hello Mistydawn.
When bad people spend their time doing bad things, they open the doors to all kinds of evil. Once in a while it backfires and turns on them. One could make the case that is what is happening here. Some people think the only way to justice is to administer it themselves.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and your encouragement. Sometimes it does backfire and they get what they deserve. I just wish it'd happened more often than it does.
Thank you so much for all your help, support, friendship, and ecncoragement. It always means so much to me, take care.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm not a vengeance kind of person, but monsters who mistreat children deserve whatever they get. In fiction or real life. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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I'm not a vengeance kind of person, but monsters who mistreat children deserve whatever they get. In fiction or real life. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and your fantastic six stars. I'm not either figure karma will do more than what I ever could, and I don't want karma to come back on me except when it involves babies or animals. That's when the evil in me comes out. I may only be five feet, but they won't know what hit them.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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Dynamite sometimes comes in small packages! And I would bet on you!
Comment from Gert sherwood
My what great writing Mistydawn you know how to keep us readers wanting to read more of how these sexual predators work when they abduct children.
There is one place in your story which caught my attention---
Could she be doing this? Toni compares the videos to other crime scenes. The staging is the same. Think I'll message her see if she replies.
I'm anxious to see who this she person is.?
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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My what great writing Mistydawn you know how to keep us readers wanting to read more of how these sexual predators work when they abduct children.
There is one place in your story which caught my attention---
Could she be doing this? Toni compares the videos to other crime scenes. The staging is the same. Think I'll message her see if she replies.
I'm anxious to see who this she person is.?
Gert
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a kind, encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Toni was mentally comparing the crime scenes, see if it's the same one a serial vigilante. I'm going to start giving clues as to who the person is. The first was in this chapter.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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You are so welcome Mistydawn
Gert
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Thisis excellent. Your account points out how complicated and multi-faceted these operations are. It's too bad the detectives aren't as good as the vigilantes are. They never are as good. I guess it is because they have protocol to follow. The reader may be joining with chants similar to some of the viewers in this story. It is clear you are doing continual research. Good work.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thisis excellent. Your account points out how complicated and multi-faceted these operations are. It's too bad the detectives aren't as good as the vigilantes are. They never are as good. I guess it is because they have protocol to follow. The reader may be joining with chants similar to some of the viewers in this story. It is clear you are doing continual research. Good work.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your continues support, and encouragement. It always means so much to me. The cops do what they can, I'm sure, but they have to go by the book, or risk losing the bust and getting a reprimand. Now, more so than ever.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship and encouragement. It always means the world to me. Take care.
Comment from royowen
I guess all sorts of people are involved in sexual deviancy, I can remember a most eminent judge involved, and schoolteachers, and accountant who's serving a life term who murdered his victim. Beautifully written my friend, with two daughters and a granddaughter I find these these things sickening, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I guess all sorts of people are involved in sexual deviancy, I can remember a most eminent judge involved, and schoolteachers, and accountant who's serving a life term who murdered his victim. Beautifully written my friend, with two daughters and a granddaughter I find these these things sickening, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. Sexual deviants come from all walks of life. Many times they use their power to stay under the radar. I have three daughters, 6 granddaughters, and one great. I worry all the time.
Thank you so much for all your help, support, friendship, and encouragement. It means the world to me. Take care.
Comment from BethShelby
You are an excellent writer. I very curious as to the identity of vigilante. This police raid that had gone viral shows a lot of outrage on the part of people who are tired of the guilty not being made to pay for their crimes against children. I'm looking forward to your next post.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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You are an excellent writer. I very curious as to the identity of vigilante. This police raid that had gone viral shows a lot of outrage on the part of people who are tired of the guilty not being made to pay for their crimes against children. I'm looking forward to your next post.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review and wonderful comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I will be giving a second clue as to who the vigilante is when the police investigates again. The first was in this chapter.
Thank you again, for all your support, and encouragement. It always means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Ulla
Oh, dear, this is getting spookier by the minute, Misty. The corruption of some men is really scary. It makes me sick, and the wish to have their bits cut off is very strong. What sickens me is that it happens all the time in real life. I'm waiting for what's next. I hope they get the bastards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Oh, dear, this is getting spookier by the minute, Misty. The corruption of some men is really scary. It makes me sick, and the wish to have their bits cut off is very strong. What sickens me is that it happens all the time in real life. I'm waiting for what's next. I hope they get the bastards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a marvelous review and your shiny six-stars. I figure their pea brains must've short circuited, destroying what little common decency they had instilled in them as a kid. Public castration could be a good deterrent, lol.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It means the world to me, take care.
