House for Rent
Things are not always as they appear.4 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Well, that was scary as hell and very visual. You know when I was a teen scary movies were very big and all of us girls went to see everyone to them. It was such fun being scared, I remember in Jaws, jumping out of my seat and screaming. since then I haven't watched many, but the ones I have watched lately, were more than scary. They were spooky, and made my skin crawl. No, I don't watch them anymore:(((((
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Well, that was scary as hell and very visual. You know when I was a teen scary movies were very big and all of us girls went to see everyone to them. It was such fun being scared, I remember in Jaws, jumping out of my seat and screaming. since then I haven't watched many, but the ones I have watched lately, were more than scary. They were spooky, and made my skin crawl. No, I don't watch them anymore:(((((
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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I like scary movies, but my husband doesn't so I always end up watching them alone. I tell him it helps me with research. lol. I am glad you took the time to read my story. Thank you.
Comment from cleo85
This story remind me of old folk tales and modern urban legends, but has its own unique story line and ghost. The story enthralls the reader, who kept reading. Then the story ends in an oxymoron: The story ends, but will go on eternally. Well, Ghosts don't exist says my rational mind, but it might be better to avoid Dentists and their receptionists in the future...
Providing the illustration for this unusual story is an ho0nor for me.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This story remind me of old folk tales and modern urban legends, but has its own unique story line and ghost. The story enthralls the reader, who kept reading. Then the story ends in an oxymoron: The story ends, but will go on eternally. Well, Ghosts don't exist says my rational mind, but it might be better to avoid Dentists and their receptionists in the future...
Providing the illustration for this unusual story is an ho0nor for me.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the six stars. I am so honored that you like it. I just love your work. I saw the piece and decided that was it and it was perfect even before I looked at the artist. I wasn't surprised though because you do amazing work.
Comment from AnnieDawn
I really enjoyed this story and usually I don't take to ghost stories. This one captured my attention and carried me through to the end. A good, unique plot and well written. Great job.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I really enjoyed this story and usually I don't take to ghost stories. This one captured my attention and carried me through to the end. A good, unique plot and well written. Great job.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Hancock kat
I love the unexpected twists. This story kept me wanting to know what was next.
I think a little more info that Brad was haunting her from the start instead of her depression that caused her losing things could have been more clear.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I love the unexpected twists. This story kept me wanting to know what was next.
I think a little more info that Brad was haunting her from the start instead of her depression that caused her losing things could have been more clear.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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I will work on that when I edit. Thank you for taking the time to review.
