Phones on 'Silent'
When was the last time you just enjoyed each other?30 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
A powerful Naani poem well built up throughout its syllables counting structure.A life's romantic rare touch of lovable love together well spent among the satin sheets divine!
You deserve the winning post, Poetess!
Congratulations!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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A powerful Naani poem well built up throughout its syllables counting structure.A life's romantic rare touch of lovable love together well spent among the satin sheets divine!
You deserve the winning post, Poetess!
Congratulations!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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A wonderful review, Tony -- your reviews always make me smile and I'm so glad you've added your 'warm grin' to your profile!! ;) :) Thanx again! ;) Yvette
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I hope everything is going on well now with your darling mother!
Have a Wonderful and Merry Christmas Yvette!
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Beautiful poem .So romantic and sexy all in one .Congratulations on your win you deserve it .Your poem and the picture you selected it absolutely beautiful.Well done !
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Beautiful poem .So romantic and sexy all in one .Congratulations on your win you deserve it .Your poem and the picture you selected it absolutely beautiful.Well done !
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Thank you so very much,Carmen!! And please excuse the EXTREME TARDINESS of this reply -- taking care of all of my father's affairs and making sure my mother was all set to move forward really over-whelmed whatever spare time used to exist (lol!!). Hope all's well out there with you, and I'm looking forward to writing and reading again! Take good care and many bright wishes for the Christmas Season!! ;) Yvette
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God Bless You Yvette and give you the strength to take care of your family and your beautiful self ! Merry Christmas :)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your alliteration will draw the reader in. The use of s's create the ambiance of the poem's imagery. The vowel sound effect the mood of comfort and delight. There are appeals to many senses. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Your alliteration will draw the reader in. The use of s's create the ambiance of the poem's imagery. The vowel sound effect the mood of comfort and delight. There are appeals to many senses. Well thought out.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Lover/Poet,
haha In just 25 syllables - exactly on the word requirement - you have offered the reader a luscious, romantic image. One that isn't written out plainly, but might as well be. hahaha Nice job. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Lover/Poet,
haha In just 25 syllables - exactly on the word requirement - you have offered the reader a luscious, romantic image. One that isn't written out plainly, but might as well be. hahaha Nice job. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was beautiful. Sensual and romantic. I loved your imagery, visuals and the wonderful artwork.
This should do very well in the contest; I wish you luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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This was beautiful. Sensual and romantic. I loved your imagery, visuals and the wonderful artwork.
This should do very well in the contest; I wish you luck in the booths.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Mark D. R.
You created a great alternative to our quarantine type existence in this Naani contest entry. You traded sweat pants for lace and satin sheets for the two of you - classy! And this scene depicted with soft jazz music adds to the delight.
My guess is you will garner a number of votes for this post. I will keep a lookout for the same. (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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You created a great alternative to our quarantine type existence in this Naani contest entry. You traded sweat pants for lace and satin sheets for the two of you - classy! And this scene depicted with soft jazz music adds to the delight.
My guess is you will garner a number of votes for this post. I will keep a lookout for the same. (-;
Mark
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from lyenochka
Great title and poem about people intentionally taking time to enjoy each other's company. A lovely presentation and invoking the sense of touch, sound and taste. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Great title and poem about people intentionally taking time to enjoy each other's company. A lovely presentation and invoking the sense of touch, sound and taste. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you for stopping by for the review today!
Comment from equestrik
Good writing here for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest.The writing is beautifully sensual. Good presentation with the picture going well with your writing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Good writing here for the Naani Poem writing prompt contest.The writing is beautifully sensual. Good presentation with the picture going well with your writing.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thanks so very much for such an awesome review here... those stars are just a shining surprise this morning! Have a wonderful day!
Comment from L. Kalere
This is luscious in every sense. Your choice of words create powerful imagery...sight, touch, sound, and taste. You've got it all, wrapped in a nice little package. Your choice of artwork is perfect. Very nicely done. Congrats!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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This is luscious in every sense. Your choice of words create powerful imagery...sight, touch, sound, and taste. You've got it all, wrapped in a nice little package. Your choice of artwork is perfect. Very nicely done. Congrats!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Oh, thank you, THANK YOU for this wonderful review and those outstanding stars! I was feeling a bit romantic, I suppose, and it found its way into my pen... 8-)
Comment from Hopeful2
You've done a nice job of meeting the requirements of the contest with a poem that is replete with sensory images in just four short lines. You also matched up well the colors of the text and background with a perfect visual image. Your poem, again in very few words, also captures the essence of a moment of personal life experience.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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You've done a nice job of meeting the requirements of the contest with a poem that is replete with sensory images in just four short lines. You also matched up well the colors of the text and background with a perfect visual image. Your poem, again in very few words, also captures the essence of a moment of personal life experience.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Oh, thank you, THANK YOU for this wonderful review and those outstanding stars! I was feeling a bit romantic, I suppose, and it found its way into my pen... 8-)
