OL No Name
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Comment from Ulla
I really liked this poem with a story within. It had a great Western feel to it. Heck it was as Western tale within the poem. He came, he saw and he conquered and he died in that same wain. A great entry. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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I really liked this poem with a story within. It had a great Western feel to it. Heck it was as Western tale within the poem. He came, he saw and he conquered and he died in that same wain. A great entry. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! This story is creative and captivating, and leaves the reader wanting more. As your description unfolded, the imagery was compelling and impressive. You made the reader as familiar with Ol No Name as you, the writer was. This story is a great contender in the contest. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Wow! This story is creative and captivating, and leaves the reader wanting more. As your description unfolded, the imagery was compelling and impressive. You made the reader as familiar with Ol No Name as you, the writer was. This story is a great contender in the contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Thank you for he very kind review and six beautiful stars, you
honor me.
Comment from zanya
Wow! this is an enthralling story of a life told in a poem and with rhyme-recalling an era that is, to all intents and purposes gone- it's actually a full-sized slice of social history - a gem!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Wow! this is an enthralling story of a life told in a poem and with rhyme-recalling an era that is, to all intents and purposes gone- it's actually a full-sized slice of social history - a gem!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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The review and six beautiful stars honor me. Thank you.
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
The form, metre and rhyme scheme are close to flawless. The story it tells is an intriguing one. It clearly explains the man's life and why he died.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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The form, metre and rhyme scheme are close to flawless. The story it tells is an intriguing one. It clearly explains the man's life and why he died.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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In my youth, I knew a man like this, He was the model for the poem.
Thank you for the shiny six.
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your narrative poem--with some wonderful lyric qualities--is excellent in every respect. You have captured, through his actions, the character of a
person who lived, and died, alone. How very sad!
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Your narrative poem--with some wonderful lyric qualities--is excellent in every respect. You have captured, through his actions, the character of a
person who lived, and died, alone. How very sad!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from dmt1967
He brought in some horses, (he) saddle broke. (his)
I love this picture and the poem. It is a very well told story in a poem and the drawing helped covey the mystery of his demeanor. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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He brought in some horses, (he) saddle broke. (his)
I love this picture and the poem. It is a very well told story in a poem and the drawing helped covey the mystery of his demeanor. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Willie I enjoyed reading your well written verse. Your insight into a character such as this helped your readers to see this mysterious loner with compassion and curiosity. It was clever and thoughtfully presented. Well done!!
Melissa
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Hello Willie I enjoyed reading your well written verse. Your insight into a character such as this helped your readers to see this mysterious loner with compassion and curiosity. It was clever and thoughtfully presented. Well done!!
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear Willie P. Smith,
I wish I had six stars. This is a fabulous story in a poem. You have a great rhyme scheme, great flow. The artwork is perfect for your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
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Dear Willie P. Smith,
I wish I had six stars. This is a fabulous story in a poem. You have a great rhyme scheme, great flow. The artwork is perfect for your poem. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Congratulations on all time best status and recognized status. Your note says it all--he died the same way he lived, ALONE> This is well-drafted and flows nicely within a tight structure.
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Congratulations on all time best status and recognized status. Your note says it all--he died the same way he lived, ALONE> This is well-drafted and flows nicely within a tight structure.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is really great. It is one of the best western poems I have ever read. There used to be (or still may be) a magazine called "Old West" that published poetry like this, but much wasn't this good.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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This is really great. It is one of the best western poems I have ever read. There used to be (or still may be) a magazine called "Old West" that published poetry like this, but much wasn't this good.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Carol, you honor me with your praise and bright shiny stars. Appreciated very much.
