And We Still Lost
I Voted Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
I don't remember if I voted for this work, so if this is a repeat, please excuse me. The whole story is hilarious, very over the top, but hilarious.
I voted in person also, living in a highly Democratic city, I didn't trust the mail or the mail recipients. I really don't know what to think, could they really be that brazen and unremorseful? If so I fear for our country, Trump will survive this illegal defeat but I'm sure he is in pain. He loves our country and doesn't deserve the treatment he has received.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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I don't remember if I voted for this work, so if this is a repeat, please excuse me. The whole story is hilarious, very over the top, but hilarious.
I voted in person also, living in a highly Democratic city, I didn't trust the mail or the mail recipients. I really don't know what to think, could they really be that brazen and unremorseful? If so I fear for our country, Trump will survive this illegal defeat but I'm sure he is in pain. He loves our country and doesn't deserve the treatment he has received.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2020
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That's for sure. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Becky. Yeah, I try to make all my ridiculous stories over the top like this. Lol. I dearly appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great night.
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Ron
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Congratulations. Good work. It is like an action movie without a second of boredom. Luckily it is a fiction. Hard to believe such a degree of hatred and equally hard to believe one would go through risking one's life to vote. Voting should be a pleasure.
A minor suggestion. There should be some minor damage to the Republican guy to make the story more real and exciting.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Congratulations. Good work. It is like an action movie without a second of boredom. Luckily it is a fiction. Hard to believe such a degree of hatred and equally hard to believe one would go through risking one's life to vote. Voting should be a pleasure.
A minor suggestion. There should be some minor damage to the Republican guy to make the story more real and exciting.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Lol. Yeah, he didn't get too hurt in all this, did he? Hahah
Thank you for the great review and congrats, Good. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
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Ron, visit my blog (www.good-advice-book.blogspot.com ) to read some of Covid Short story.
Else read "Who is the present President." from the "I Vote." contest.
Comment from Jessica M Lee
An imaginative portrayal of how we truly feel sometimes to stand up for what we believe in. Judgment burns in our enemies' eyes as they lash out at anyone who doesn't "fit in" with their tendencies. People can be so violent, ruthless, and downright hateful towards others when we don't "agree" with the popular. But does the other side see the disaster awaiting to pounce on them? Or do they just see what the media flashes in their face every day? Without the only True and Righteous Leader this world will ever need sitting in the driver's seat, we will never truly be free from the things that the world tries to force on us. Without Him, we will continue living in a world where lies and deception thrive and breed in our day-to-day lives just like a deadly virus. Good job on your story and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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An imaginative portrayal of how we truly feel sometimes to stand up for what we believe in. Judgment burns in our enemies' eyes as they lash out at anyone who doesn't "fit in" with their tendencies. People can be so violent, ruthless, and downright hateful towards others when we don't "agree" with the popular. But does the other side see the disaster awaiting to pounce on them? Or do they just see what the media flashes in their face every day? Without the only True and Righteous Leader this world will ever need sitting in the driver's seat, we will never truly be free from the things that the world tries to force on us. Without Him, we will continue living in a world where lies and deception thrive and breed in our day-to-day lives just like a deadly virus. Good job on your story and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jessica. Yes, that is so true. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this sily piece. Have a great night.
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This was very funny and yet I had a feeling it was true. The Lefties are so determined that they are right and the Righties are wrong, that it's laughable and getting more laughable as the days go by. Great fiction.
Ralf
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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This was very funny and yet I had a feeling it was true. The Lefties are so determined that they are right and the Righties are wrong, that it's laughable and getting more laughable as the days go by. Great fiction.
Ralf
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Lol. Yes, they are. Thank you for the fantastic review, Ralf. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is fun an you seem to be compliant as far as the opening words are concerned and as far as doing everything you should do as a Republican voter. If everyone behaved as you did America would be great again, a great big bully again. Donald would be so proud.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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This is fun an you seem to be compliant as far as the opening words are concerned and as far as doing everything you should do as a Republican voter. If everyone behaved as you did America would be great again, a great big bully again. Donald would be so proud.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Lol. Maybe he would. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Pantygynt.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Vote,
I enjoyed this a LOT. (What does that say about me... hmmmm...)
*smile* It was funny - but in a dry and subtle sort of way. I love the way you don't take yourself so seriously in the piece. It is just fun. If I had a single six left, it would be yours, and gladly. (sorry!)
Note:
--> (Halfway) there, Emma and Ralph Willson raced up beside me and tried to ram me off the road.
--> need to put them in a car, maybe? I mean, a little earlier than you finally do. ha
Thanks so much and lots of good luck to you in the voting. I would vote for this one in a minute!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Vote,
I enjoyed this a LOT. (What does that say about me... hmmmm...)
*smile* It was funny - but in a dry and subtle sort of way. I love the way you don't take yourself so seriously in the piece. It is just fun. If I had a single six left, it would be yours, and gladly. (sorry!)
Note:
--> (Halfway) there, Emma and Ralph Willson raced up beside me and tried to ram me off the road.
--> need to put them in a car, maybe? I mean, a little earlier than you finally do. ha
Thanks so much and lots of good luck to you in the voting. I would vote for this one in a minute!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six offer, Robyn. And for pointing out the goof. I fixed it and gave the Willsons a car when first confronted.
Hopefully we can get a few more takers on this contest before deadline or it'll roll over again. We'll see.
I was just in one of those moods to write something action packed and ridiculous, so I jumped in this prompt with this silliness. Lol.
Again, thank you for the great review, Robyn. I'm glad you liked my little going to the voting booth story. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
