Comment from lancellot

Excellent

You did exactly what the prompt asked for. You painted a vivid scene that encompassed all fived senses as your characters began their journey alone a trail through the heart of nature. Your words perfectly matched the photo chosen also. Nice touch.

Great entry.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020

Thanks so much for your read and encouraging review.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Author,

I enjoyed this brief but powerful post. You had me walking along with you and your significant other. I saw the things you mentioned and enjoyed that happy crunch beneath my own feet. *smile*

The only thing that jarred me a bit was the mention of Jack - if you refer to Jack Frost, it seems unfitting to consider him ornamenting the trees. But that's just me. (May be due to different seasonal changes depending on where we live.)

Thanks and good luck~

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020

You are correct, Robin. Jack Frost is the reference. Thanks for the read and the encouraging comments.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

The ending of this walk would certainly make it memorable! Walking in the Autumn is glorious. I love the crunching and rustling of the leaves as well as the cool relief from Summer's heat.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020

Thank for the read and review. Yes the incident made it hard to forget. Your comments are much appreciated.