Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Ooooh! What a beautiful picture you created in this brief 5-7-5! It reminded me of that lullaby Winkin Blinkin and Nod. I could see the frosted branches like a net in the sea of midnight sky. Gorgeous!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020

Thanks for a wonderful review, Helen. I remember that nursery rhyme. So happy you enjoyed this write. From my bedroom window I often see twinkling stars "caught up" in the bare branches of trees.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a good mix of words and artwork. It person in the picture is reflective. Stars illimunitae the beauty and also are a metaphor for hope the darkness.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020

Thanks Joan. I enjoyed writing this chapter in the renga book.

Stay safe
Blessings Julia

reply by dragonpoet on 12-Nov-2020

No problem, Julia.
Same to you.
Joan

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Funny that mine followed this one and I'm just now reviewing... lol! It is what it is, my lady! ;) :) And have I mentioned how much I love the fishing motif you started here? :) :) Beautifully created... thanx for sharing that vision! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020

"It is what it is" ... Lol check out Bill Schott's latest LOL

Thanks for your kind comments, sweet Yvette

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Isn't it just amazing how words can describe what we see, and enables us to share what we see and feel with people from around the world. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020

Hi Ric, thanks for a terrific review. Happy I painted a word picture that resonated with you.

Stay safe and healthy

Blessings Julia

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Fishing for Stars
by juliaSjames

Hello, Julia,

Thank you very much for adding a chapter to our Renga Book. It's a good fit to Zanya's couplet. Good syllable count and connection between lines, also, a beautiful presentation!

hugs,
gypsy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020

Dear Gypsy

Thanks for your excellent review. Your trees are quite bare now and silvered with starlight.
I'm honoured to contribute to the book.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Hi Julia. I love the imagery here. A beautiful vision of the night sky
Stars captured in the branches of a tree.
Nice use of alliteration -"silver stars"
The photo is beautiful and perfect for this poem.
Nancy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020

Thanks Nancy. Happy you enjoyed. This is part of a collaborative renga book organized by Gypsy. I'm happy to support.

Hope all's well. Stay safe and blessed my dear

Julia