Seasons
Love all the seasons but Spring is the best.17 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
This is a charming poem, highlighting each of the seasons but dwelling a while longer on springtime, which is mine as well as your favorite season. I think all readers resonate with birth on all levels when spring arrives.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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This is a charming poem, highlighting each of the seasons but dwelling a while longer on springtime, which is mine as well as your favorite season. I think all readers resonate with birth on all levels when spring arrives.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yes, Spring! Glorious Spring!! ;) Such a fun offering for this hopeful contest here -- good abcb rhyme scheme throughout! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Yes, Spring! Glorious Spring!! ;) Such a fun offering for this hopeful contest here -- good abcb rhyme scheme throughout! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Oh, wow. I really enjoyed this offering! The bad thing was I was even working on a potential poem for this contest -- yikes!~ I think I just read the winner, though. *smile*
A smooth, even flow and a great theme mark this one for the voting booth top tier. Thanks and good luck~
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Oh, wow. I really enjoyed this offering! The bad thing was I was even working on a potential poem for this contest -- yikes!~ I think I just read the winner, though. *smile*
A smooth, even flow and a great theme mark this one for the voting booth top tier. Thanks and good luck~
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. You covered all four seasons in one story in a colorful way when you were only required to cover one, nice. Technically sound, art work reflects the story, strong ending with the Spring season. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Very good. You covered all four seasons in one story in a colorful way when you were only required to cover one, nice. Technically sound, art work reflects the story, strong ending with the Spring season. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very lovely poem about spring. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. My favourite quarter's springtime when the whole earth comes alive. Birds begin to build s new home. And bee workers clean their hive. Very nicely done . Lovely photo.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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This is a Very lovely poem about spring. Nice flow and rhyme scheme. My favourite quarter's springtime when the whole earth comes alive. Birds begin to build s new home. And bee workers clean their hive. Very nicely done . Lovely photo.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from royowen
Spring is now in the offing, although I think it's well advanced now, with that tell tale variable part of it that really swings around, lots of fronts to contend with. Well done, this a lovely post, articulate, smooth, in no fixed meter and abcb rhyme, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Spring is now in the offing, although I think it's well advanced now, with that tell tale variable part of it that really swings around, lots of fronts to contend with. Well done, this a lovely post, articulate, smooth, in no fixed meter and abcb rhyme, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Spring just brings a new joy after a long dull winter. Have a great weekend.
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Well done
Comment from palmart
Great poem, based in Mother Nature! It depicts nicely the cycle of times and seasons! Used adjectives to describe and paint with poetry your tour! Picture brings the contrast between the dark and cold with the light and warm descriptions. Well Done!
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Great poem, based in Mother Nature! It depicts nicely the cycle of times and seasons! Used adjectives to describe and paint with poetry your tour! Picture brings the contrast between the dark and cold with the light and warm descriptions. Well Done!
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thanks for stopping by to review. Have a great weekend.
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You´re welcome, Author!!
Have a shining Week!!
