Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Second Chance at Love"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
14 total reviews
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Oh my. Poor little thing. It has always amazed me that men think they have the right to do these things. Glad Alejandro came to see her and wants to take care of her. She needs that.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Oh my. Poor little thing. It has always amazed me that men think they have the right to do these things. Glad Alejandro came to see her and wants to take care of her. She needs that.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. They do what they do without giving one bit of thought about the damage they've caused.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship and encouragement. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's heartbreaking, isn't it, that little children are taken and destroyed like this, they don't get to be a child and play. I'm so pleased Alejandro loves her and sees the lovely person Anna is. This is a wonderful, well written chapter, Misty. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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It's heartbreaking, isn't it, that little children are taken and destroyed like this, they don't get to be a child and play. I'm so pleased Alejandro loves her and sees the lovely person Anna is. This is a wonderful, well written chapter, Misty. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a sweet review. It is heartbreaking, them having to go through all they do. Alejandro is a sweetheart. He'll do a lot for her.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship, and encouragement. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm glad Anna got a second chance. She deserves to have someone to love her and help her heal. She probably is broken, but Alejandro might be able to help her. She hasn't done anything wrong. She was just a kid, and she had no choice.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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I'm glad Anna got a second chance. She deserves to have someone to love her and help her heal. She probably is broken, but Alejandro might be able to help her. She hasn't done anything wrong. She was just a kid, and she had no choice.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a sweet review. You're right, she didn't have a choice. It did leave her very broken, empty inside. Alejandro will be her saving grace.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship, and encouragement. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Mia Twysted
The more you hear her story the more heartache you feel. However, you begin to see how strong she really is. Not many could go through what she did and come out functioning on the other side. She took control of her life and worked hard to make changes. I can feel that in her.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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The more you hear her story the more heartache you feel. However, you begin to see how strong she really is. Not many could go through what she did and come out functioning on the other side. She took control of her life and worked hard to make changes. I can feel that in her.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for such a warm review. Anna is a very strong woman. She helped many escape a tragic fate.
Thank you again for all your help, support, friendship and encouragement. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I got a huge lump in my throat just reading this. There is someone, a goodhearted someone for every broken soul. This is a marvelous piece of writing!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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I got a huge lump in my throat just reading this. There is someone, a goodhearted someone for every broken soul. This is a marvelous piece of writing!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a kind, encouraging review. I'm so glad it had an impact on you. Knowing that means a lot to me.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It means the world to me.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is nicely written. May be fiction but can be true to life. Everyone deserves a chance mistakes you make in life doesn't define who you are. Well done. Nice photo.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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This is nicely written. May be fiction but can be true to life. Everyone deserves a chance mistakes you make in life doesn't define who you are. Well done. Nice photo.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Anna is fiction, but her encounters are from child trafficked survivors. I'm glad the point came across so strongly. I'm hoping his statement might change the direction of someone's life. I'm hoping the book will raise awareness, save a child from having to endure such a horrid fate. Maybe help a survivor.
Thank you again for reading my chapter. Your support is always appreciated, take care.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mistydawn.
The story is tragedy intertwined with a love story which is a bit of an unusual twist. It demonstrates the inhumanity of many to treat people like something less than human.
It's good that Anna has found Alejandro. He could be the one thing that saves her life in more ways than one.
Robert
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Hello Mistydawn.
The story is tragedy intertwined with a love story which is a bit of an unusual twist. It demonstrates the inhumanity of many to treat people like something less than human.
It's good that Anna has found Alejandro. He could be the one thing that saves her life in more ways than one.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. It is a bit of a twist, but it might work, right? Depending on how it's written? I'm hoping to show the personal damage it does. Why so many turn to drugs or commit suicide. What do you think?
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It means the world to me, take care.
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Hello Mistydawn.
I think you could turn the story to show a successful recovery from the awful circumstances Anna was thrown into. Focus on the relationship between the two and use that avenue for "fleshing" out the emotions that you want to show. Use the story to show how she can have her esteem restored.
Robert
Comment from royowen
One can understand why Anna feels the way she does, I've felt that same sense of helplessness myself, but it's not based on anything that makes any sense, just what one feels. But feelings betray us, because they're no reality anyway. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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One can understand why Anna feels the way she does, I've felt that same sense of helplessness myself, but it's not based on anything that makes any sense, just what one feels. But feelings betray us, because they're no reality anyway. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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hank you so much for reading my chapter and your encouraging review. I think we've all probably felt hopeless and some point in our life and then something happens, turns the situation around.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, that is a beautifully written chapter. I do hope Alejandro is sincere and will live up to his words. So far it looks like it. She's been through so much ugliness in her life, and what she's just gone through is the worst of worst. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Hi Misty, that is a beautifully written chapter. I do hope Alejandro is sincere and will live up to his words. So far it looks like it. She's been through so much ugliness in her life, and what she's just gone through is the worst of worst. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review and your wonderful stars. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Alejandro is a sweetheart, will help her through a lot.
Thank you again, for all your support, your encouraging words and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This account brings out the long term damage abuse has. It clearly causes PTSD but there is victim blaming that her was doing a bit of, but caught himself. The reader who understands with will be caught up with the characters. The reader will want to say, "No you are beautiful." There might be some healing that comes from people reading this. I am including the link from my webpage:
http://www.angelfire.com/vt/rcwn/Pagefive.html
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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This account brings out the long term damage abuse has. It clearly causes PTSD but there is victim blaming that her was doing a bit of, but caught himself. The reader who understands with will be caught up with the characters. The reader will want to say, "No you are beautiful." There might be some healing that comes from people reading this. I am including the link from my webpage:
http://www.angelfire.com/vt/rcwn/Pagefive.html
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm hoping I can show her pain, inner struggles, the roller coaster of emotions that goes with it. If it helps someone heal that'll be a big plus. I can see where your webpage can be helpful Thank you for sharing it with me.
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My pleasure