Mended Heart
She brought true love into my heart.3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A-w-w such depth of powerful emotion conveyed so effectively in such a succinct format of the Senryu - how difficult unrequited can be - but without a taste of it perhaps we wouldn't appreciate the real thing when it shows up in our lives !
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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A-w-w such depth of powerful emotion conveyed so effectively in such a succinct format of the Senryu - how difficult unrequited can be - but without a taste of it perhaps we wouldn't appreciate the real thing when it shows up in our lives !
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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You make an excellent point. Thanks much for your read and review.
Comment from L. Kalere
Well, thank goodness for Lorie. Your 5-7-5 is very nicely written, and the artwork you selected complements the story. Best of luck in the contest..
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Well, thank goodness for Lorie. Your 5-7-5 is very nicely written, and the artwork you selected complements the story. Best of luck in the contest..
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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You can say that again. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Earl Corp
I am embarrassed to say I had to look up what unrequited meant. Good luck in the contest. You chose Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I am embarrassed to say I had to look up what unrequited meant. Good luck in the contest. You chose Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I had a teacher who had a look it up club. The motto was "Never Guess Look It Up." Thanks for the read, review and taking the time to look it up.
