Comment from judester

Excellent

Another win, bravo Raul. I love your positive messages and happy to see that you are winning some contests. Are you taking any writing courses offered on fanstory?
Have a great day, j

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020

Thanks! No I already took writing courses in college! I have passed them all!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's an encouraging senryu. Not everything is possible but if there are things that are in our control, we need to take the initiative to "make it happen." Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thanks! I hope to win. I'm crossing my fingers. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

reply by lyenochka on 06-Nov-2020

Keep writing and entering those contests!

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thanks! I will! :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is awesome writing. Love this one. Great 5-7-5 senryu for the contest. It's up to you to make sure your dreams come true so make it happen. Nicely done. Very fitting photo for your words.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork, quote,
and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-The message is positive, too;
work to make your dreams come true.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020

Thanks! I have fixed it. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I hope to win. I'm crossing my fingers.

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Nov-2020

You are very welcome. I changed the review.