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Spare Change

Cinquain Poetry Contest Entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Paul Borders
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Very touching. I was just speaking with someone about an hour ago about dogs. I wish I had noticed this contest sooner, I would have voted for your entry.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review and stars, Paul. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great week.

    Ron
Comment from equestrik
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Heartbreaking. This is a very nice poem to advocate for pets and the value of their companionship. I think it is a well composed poem for the contest. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Equestrik. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Cindy Decker
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Lee, this is a beautiful poem, and expresses in eloquent fashion what all homeless people feel who own pets, dogs especially. Dogs first. (They are no different from those of us with homes who treat our dogs like gold).
This is a beautiful poem and photo of people who have one small beam of happiness.
Best wishes
Good luck
Cindy

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Cindy. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great night.

    Ron
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet.. I gave you your first vote because your poem stood out from the crowd.

Yes , there are poor people that are willing to share what little they have .. even to buy dog food for a stray..

What a loving gesture.. you can see from the pic that it brings her much joy ..

Keep safe!


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the fantastic review and the vote, Tracey. Plus, congrats on the win as well. I'm glad to see someone throw something different in there for a contest. I really appreciate the generous stars and support, T. Thank you again. Have a great day.

    =]

    Ron
reply by tempeste on 09-Nov-2020
    Ciao!

    Thank you Ron.

    It?s like I won twice ..I?m always happy when the poem I voted for wins the podium ( smile)

    Your poem is a beautiful example of someone that despite being poor has a big heart and helped a being in need.

    Take care

    Ciao!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Exceptional
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This put a smile on my face. I'm not sure that it should as I think more about this. It shows me someone that has nothing but uses what little they have for the dog they love. Wonderful poem. Amazing how you share such a detailed story with a poem of five lines. Fantastic.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Michael. I would think that most people in this situation would think this way. I know I would. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this little piece and thank you again.
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Good image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-You did a good job describing
how important pets can
be to those who don't
have a lot else positive in their lives.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the great review, Pam. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Nov-2020
    You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.