Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 100 "We Reached the End of the Line"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
9 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautiful ! Waiting for the midnight train ! We reached the end of the line. Love the beautiful photo. Goes well with your writing. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Beautiful ! Waiting for the midnight train ! We reached the end of the line. Love the beautiful photo. Goes well with your writing. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Hugs,
Gypsy
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So many people contributed to your book here and all good thinks come to an end and this has been a magical journey, much enjoyed and thank you for inventing this too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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So many people contributed to your book here and all good thinks come to an end and this has been a magical journey, much enjoyed and thank you for inventing this too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Comment from TommyWrites
This is really cool! The fact that you've gathered together poets and made a book, and it's now come to "the end of the line"
I really like this haiku, and what it symbolizes. The picture you chose captures the feel of the poem perfectly. I've never really gotten into writing haikus, or I should say I'm not very good at writing them (practice I suppose!), but I do love reading them. I truly enjoyed this.
This is a beautiful piece, thank you for sharing!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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This is really cool! The fact that you've gathered together poets and made a book, and it's now come to "the end of the line"
I really like this haiku, and what it symbolizes. The picture you chose captures the feel of the poem perfectly. I've never really gotten into writing haikus, or I should say I'm not very good at writing them (practice I suppose!), but I do love reading them. I truly enjoyed this.
This is a beautiful piece, thank you for sharing!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Tommy. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I was confused at first about the subject. End of the line for what? But that cleared up as I read on. Congrats on finishing your book. This poem looks like a perfect ending.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I was confused at first about the subject. End of the line for what? But that cleared up as I read on. Congrats on finishing your book. This poem looks like a perfect ending.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, michael. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Congrats! You have completed writing the end of the line, 100 chapters of the book, now waiting for publication of the book; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Congrats! You have completed writing the end of the line, 100 chapters of the book, now waiting for publication of the book; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, alcreator. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Gypsy!
Such a lovely and fitting final couplet for this project!
I so enjoyed reading each and every chapter, and I am happy to have been a miniscule part of it!
Looking forward to your next installment!
diane
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Hello Gypsy!
Such a lovely and fitting final couplet for this project!
I so enjoyed reading each and every chapter, and I am happy to have been a miniscule part of it!
Looking forward to your next installment!
diane
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your review and time.
Gypsy
Comment from wishawave
It is very amusing. What does it mean here "We reached the end of the line"? Taking in consideration of what the photo has expresses, does it mean actually the train will not come? This poem entices imagination.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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It is very amusing. What does it mean here "We reached the end of the line"? Taking in consideration of what the photo has expresses, does it mean actually the train will not come? This poem entices imagination.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hello my friend,
Renga is a Japanese poetic form that consists of 100 stanzas written collaborative by different poets. This stanza number 100 is the last one thus the end of the line.
Thank you very much for your review.
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Woww!! One hundred! ;) I can't wait to start a new one - like a little kid in pre-school: can we do it now? can we? can we? LOL!! ;) :) Thanx for leading this for us, Marival, and I really do look forward to the next! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Woww!! One hundred! ;) I can't wait to start a new one - like a little kid in pre-school: can we do it now? can we? can we? LOL!! ;) :) Thanx for leading this for us, Marival, and I really do look forward to the next! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hello, Yvette, thank you for reading my last renga chapter. I appreciate it. :) Have a lovely day!
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from George Santhosh
Wow! Glad to know the earlier post was just a technical error.
It's a beautiful collection of poems you have created along with fellow writers. The language is sophisticated and quite beautiful. Apologies, as I could not delve into detail of each poem completely, but only on the text posted here.
Thank you for your writings.
Cheers, George
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Wow! Glad to know the earlier post was just a technical error.
It's a beautiful collection of poems you have created along with fellow writers. The language is sophisticated and quite beautiful. Apologies, as I could not delve into detail of each poem completely, but only on the text posted here.
Thank you for your writings.
Cheers, George
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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I had some technical problems. I'm sorry about that. I will fix it and post it later.
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George, would you please read my corrected poem and change the rating? I would really appreciate it. What you read before was a technical problem. Thank you
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Hi, thank you for the notice. I have read your collection and have enjoyed it. I have updated the rating accordingly. Cheers :)
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Thank you very much, George, I appreciate your review and kind words. Thank you for reviewing again.