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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Beth
I liked your prose about viewing elk during rutting season;
while you were taking a walk in elk country.
I found your authors note very interesting.
Gert

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
    Thank you Gert. I'm glad you liked that poem. These elk were beautiful animals and they were fun to watch.
    Beth
reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Nov-2020
    You are welcome Beth
    Gert
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I was surprised by your comment that the Cherokee depleted the herds because I had always heard that the Native American's were natural conservationist and it was White Man that messed things up. Hmm, now I am wondering. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much Barbara I really appreciate the review and comments. The White man pushed the Cherokee into such a small area that they had to kill what game was around in order to survive. I'm sure they didn't want to deplete the herds but they needed food
    This is in the area of the Cherokee reservation.
    Beth
Comment from royowen
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A beautifully composed poem, praising these marvellous animals that inhabit these areas of North Carolina dear Beth. Don't see poetry dear girl, very much, but this is lovely, good luck, in this contest, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you Roy for the nice review and comments and expecially for the six stars.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 07-Nov-2020
    We earned
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, I Walk in Elk Country, presented in three, nine-syllable-lined octaves, captures this yearly ritual and its importance to the existence of these majestic creatures.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review and for the comments. It is an interesting ritual to witness. Sometime the Bull have to fight to keep someother male from trying to claim their harem. The animal kingdom is amazing.
    Beth
Comment from kmoss
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The beautiful picture captures the elk in the thick of his mating call. This poem has great imagery. It is a great entry to the Take a Photo contest. Good luck!!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
    Beth
Comment from Realist101
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WOW! You took this pic???? BRAVE WOMAN! :D I love the rhyme and meaning with this too. I've seen videos of people, one guy who was sitting down because a young bull was standing over him with antlers ready. It was going to stab him good. Elk and even buck deer can be dangerous! Nice work Beth. S.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you Susan, I wasn't that close too him. I was using a lens that was made from taking pictures at a distance. There were park rangers around to make you didn't get too close and you stayed near your car. I remember seeing that picture too. I really appreciate the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your photo is awesome, Beth. I enjoyed reading your well-constructed poem. Great job with the prompt. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. You told a great story in a poem, too.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2020
    Thank you Jan, I really appreciate the review and nice comments.
    Beth
Comment from Mistydawn
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The Male sure can't dally around, can he, only having such a short window of time. I imagine he's loving life and every female around in those two days, lol. Probably needs the year to recuperate. I didn't know they lost their horns. Your poem is well-written, very interesting, educational.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
    Thank you for the review and comments. They are interesting animals. I enjoyed being about to watch them for few hours.
Comment from Ben Colder
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We have them now back in Arkansas. My son has a trophy in his den collections. As you say, they can put on show especially during rutting season.
Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
    Thank you Chuck, I appreciate the review. It sounds as though you son has taken on down. Are you a hunter too?
    Beth
reply by Ben Colder on 06-Nov-2020
    Was. eyesight not the best now. he makes up the difference.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a very interesting post with a great photo to illustrate this entry for the Take A Photo Poetry contest. You were blessed to get that wonderful shot!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
    Thank you Rebecca. I took at least 30 picture. They weren't all that good. LOL.
    Beth