A grieving daughter
Grief and support28 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This is beautiful! Lately, I have had to write words like this much too often as this year, so many loved ones of friends have died. You shared very empathetic words. Best to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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This is beautiful! Lately, I have had to write words like this much too often as this year, so many loved ones of friends have died. You shared very empathetic words. Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your thoughts and review.
Comment from sammielwf
Dear Mystery Author,
This is a beautiful and gentle write. It is a wonderful portrayal of empathy supporting grief.
Any of us that have grieved deeply for ( in this case) a mother- knows that the grief is deep and leaves empty for a while. But the empathy and caring of a friend.....that reminds us of Spirits caring and love is worth oh so much.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Author,
This is a beautiful and gentle write. It is a wonderful portrayal of empathy supporting grief.
Any of us that have grieved deeply for ( in this case) a mother- knows that the grief is deep and leaves empty for a while. But the empathy and caring of a friend.....that reminds us of Spirits caring and love is worth oh so much.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind comments.
Take care
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a kind and sincere outreaching to someone who would have to be hurting dreadfully. I can't even imagine the day when my mom is gone!
I thought this was well composed and kind, as it reveals your kind heart. I only have a small suggestion - which you are welcome to ignore. *smile*
--> No doubt, your mom received His Special Blessing and the foundation she built is strong.
--> No doubt, your mom received His Special Blessing.
If you consider this edit, I think it would put a bit more powerful punch to the end of this important statement AND you have already commented on the strong foundation she gave so that is a bit repetitive.
Thanks and good luck~
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a kind and sincere outreaching to someone who would have to be hurting dreadfully. I can't even imagine the day when my mom is gone!
I thought this was well composed and kind, as it reveals your kind heart. I only have a small suggestion - which you are welcome to ignore. *smile*
--> No doubt, your mom received His Special Blessing and the foundation she built is strong.
--> No doubt, your mom received His Special Blessing.
If you consider this edit, I think it would put a bit more powerful punch to the end of this important statement AND you have already commented on the strong foundation she gave so that is a bit repetitive.
Thanks and good luck~
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I followed your advise thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is well written. I like how you structured this poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It is well written. I like how you structured this poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review and good thoughts
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful empathy with grief poem for a grieving daughter. Your love and care comes shining through these caring lines.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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A beautiful empathy with grief poem for a grieving daughter. Your love and care comes shining through these caring lines.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you Janet for your kind comments and review.
Blessings to you.
Regards,
Comment from royowen
Indeed, mothers are very special, particularly to children, and the Lord surely recognises this, it is "mother" heart of God, both male and female propensities, exist in the one person, that's why we need unity between males and females. Well done, good luck blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Indeed, mothers are very special, particularly to children, and the Lord surely recognises this, it is "mother" heart of God, both male and female propensities, exist in the one person, that's why we need unity between males and females. Well done, good luck blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you Roy for your kind thoughts and review
Blessings to you and family
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Well done
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, you have written a perfect poem that succeeds in portraying both empathy and grief perfectly. Losing a mother is an unbearable grief and the empathy and good advice you give in this poem is perfect. Your words are lovely and sound very comforting and reassuring that the mother is always with the bereaved. Beautifully written - good luck and warm wishes Dorothy x
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hello anon, you have written a perfect poem that succeeds in portraying both empathy and grief perfectly. Losing a mother is an unbearable grief and the empathy and good advice you give in this poem is perfect. Your words are lovely and sound very comforting and reassuring that the mother is always with the bereaved. Beautifully written - good luck and warm wishes Dorothy x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for you kind thoughts and review
Comment from karenina
Such a quietly soothing poem...affirming love and faith and accepting the daughter for right where she is in her grieving process. So many feel the need to say "Buck up"--or "She's at peace now." Losing a loved one is pain...and pain takes it's own time to heal. Touching!--Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Such a quietly soothing poem...affirming love and faith and accepting the daughter for right where she is in her grieving process. So many feel the need to say "Buck up"--or "She's at peace now." Losing a loved one is pain...and pain takes it's own time to heal. Touching!--Karenina
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you
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You're welcome.--Karenina
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written letter to a daughter who suffers grief for a mother who are not there was any longer. No one can take the pain and suffering away but it feels great to be comforted in our grieving time.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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A very well-written letter to a daughter who suffers grief for a mother who are not there was any longer. No one can take the pain and suffering away but it feels great to be comforted in our grieving time.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your review. It is appreciated.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written empathy poem. As Jesus loves his own mother , he welcomes and gives mothers a special blessing. This special blessing is given to mothers for their sacrifices and love for their children. Well done. Very beautifully heavenly looking photo.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Beautifully written empathy poem. As Jesus loves his own mother , he welcomes and gives mothers a special blessing. This special blessing is given to mothers for their sacrifices and love for their children. Well done. Very beautifully heavenly looking photo.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your kind comments and review. It is very much appreciated.
