Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 96 "Field of Barley"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for the matching picture of the amazing sky over a field of barley to complement your 5-7-5. The "golden" text is a good highlight as well. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the matching picture of the amazing sky over a field of barley to complement your 5-7-5. The "golden" text is a good highlight as well. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Joan. I appreciate all you do.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I think the picture in my 7-7 couplet reminded you of a field of barley. I like it. The red mixed with black clouds are beautiful. Yes. A storm is coming.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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I think the picture in my 7-7 couplet reminded you of a field of barley. I like it. The red mixed with black clouds are beautiful. Yes. A storm is coming.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Hello, Lisa, thank you very much for letting me know about my error. I fixed it. I don't know what happened... Thank you for reading my poem.
hugs,
gypsy
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No problem. I updated my review.
Hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
ripe golden field of barley
sways in the warm breeze at dusk
We ponder a calm moment before the harvest, when farmers think of the rewards of their work, and can take a moment to admire the beauty of the natural world.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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ripe golden field of barley
sways in the warm breeze at dusk
We ponder a calm moment before the harvest, when farmers think of the rewards of their work, and can take a moment to admire the beauty of the natural world.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Mark.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Gloria ....
I love barley. One of my favourite food groups and not in whiskey either. That stuff is dreadful. Shudder.
Excellent contribution to your book, Gypsy and there really is some majestic about standing in a field of ripe grain and you have captured that beautifully.
Always a treat to read your fine work. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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I love barley. One of my favourite food groups and not in whiskey either. That stuff is dreadful. Shudder.
Excellent contribution to your book, Gypsy and there really is some majestic about standing in a field of ripe grain and you have captured that beautifully.
Always a treat to read your fine work. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much, Gloria.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful imagery of a field at sunset! Stunning colors. Puts me in the mood for some hot barley soup on an autumn night...perhaps a follow up? We shall see.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Beautiful imagery of a field at sunset! Stunning colors. Puts me in the mood for some hot barley soup on an autumn night...perhaps a follow up? We shall see.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, June. Yes I see a follow-up coming. :)
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Such a dramatic picture! Golden is both the color and a hint at the harvest wealth.
I'm reviewing on my phone so I can't see the format but it seems this is. 7-7 but the description says it follows a 7-7
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Such a dramatic picture! Golden is both the color and a hint at the harvest wealth.
I'm reviewing on my phone so I can't see the format but it seems this is. 7-7 but the description says it follows a 7-7
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Helen.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Hugs,
Gypsy