Renga Multi-Author Book
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Nature's Sound Bite
by Lisa Wharton
Hello, Lisa,
A great addition to our Renga book. It's a good fit for the previous chapter. I like the wordplay with 'sound bite'. Well done. My only suggestion is to make the font lighter and bigger, it's kind of hard to read.
hugs,
gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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The Nature's Sound Bite
by Lisa Wharton
Hello, Lisa,
A great addition to our Renga book. It's a good fit for the previous chapter. I like the wordplay with 'sound bite'. Well done. My only suggestion is to make the font lighter and bigger, it's kind of hard to read.
hugs,
gypsy
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Is it better now?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sound of those dried up leaves brings Autumn sound to our walks in the country and down by the stream, an ambient write Lisa, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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The sound of those dried up leaves brings Autumn sound to our walks in the country and down by the stream, an ambient write Lisa, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the nice review. Yes. I enjoy walking and taking pictures so I used one of my recent photos.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! What a fun little blending of the technological lingo and the natural world here, Lisa -- delightful, my lady!! ;) Great add-on and thanx for sharing that smile today! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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LOL!! What a fun little blending of the technological lingo and the natural world here, Lisa -- delightful, my lady!! ;) Great add-on and thanx for sharing that smile today! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thanks. I think I'm getting better at this.