Early Spring
New beginnings15 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Carolyn,
I enjoyed your nature 3-5-3 poem. I like the way you describe the trees of autumn and spring by punching "Bare" and "bloom", first words in lines 1 and 3. Winter is found in the middle line where trees are sleeping through winter's cold. Not looking forward to winter's cold, I must admit. There's always some severe shoveling to do. And I'm not getting any younger!
What a sight this is, eh? ... the pink cherry blossoms with the snow-capped mountain in the background... Wow!
Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Hi Carolyn,
I enjoyed your nature 3-5-3 poem. I like the way you describe the trees of autumn and spring by punching "Bare" and "bloom", first words in lines 1 and 3. Winter is found in the middle line where trees are sleeping through winter's cold. Not looking forward to winter's cold, I must admit. There's always some severe shoveling to do. And I'm not getting any younger!
What a sight this is, eh? ... the pink cherry blossoms with the snow-capped mountain in the background... Wow!
Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 18-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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I appreciate your review.
Comment from candimandy
This was a very good read!! And very well written!! :) not too familiar with this type of poem but I sure did enjoy the read :) thanks for that hun!! Keep writing!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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This was a very good read!! And very well written!! :) not too familiar with this type of poem but I sure did enjoy the read :) thanks for that hun!! Keep writing!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from kmoss
This poem is a good entry for the contest. I love how the picture shows spring and pretty trees instead of the bare trees that the poem begins with. Good luck in the contest(if it hadn't ended already)!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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This poem is a good entry for the contest. I love how the picture shows spring and pretty trees instead of the bare trees that the poem begins with. Good luck in the contest(if it hadn't ended already)!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from AnnieDawn
Here we go with Spring and Winter has barely showed it's face. We have had snow already but then Spring like weather. Climate change I guess. Love your poem. It captures the change well. Great job.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Here we go with Spring and Winter has barely showed it's face. We have had snow already but then Spring like weather. Climate change I guess. Love your poem. It captures the change well. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging words.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of personification will draw the reader in. This could serve as a strong metaphor. It could be a message of faith and hope. That if we let things follow their natural pattern, things will work out okay. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Your use of personification will draw the reader in. This could serve as a strong metaphor. It could be a message of faith and hope. That if we let things follow their natural pattern, things will work out okay. Well thought out.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your insightful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello I'm anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Lovely nature imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Hello I'm anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Lovely nature imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank so much for your review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love how suddenly trees are like a hibernating bear. They sleep through the winter awaiting warm weather to show off their beauty again.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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I love how suddenly trees are like a hibernating bear. They sleep through the winter awaiting warm weather to show off their beauty again.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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You got what I was getting at, thank you for your inspired review.
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I like your 3-5-3 poem about early spring. I love your artwork of the beautiful cherry blossom trees. The trees do sleep, then they wake up to bloom in the spring, after winter passes. I like this poem. Nicely written. Thanks
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Hello,
I like your 3-5-3 poem about early spring. I love your artwork of the beautiful cherry blossom trees. The trees do sleep, then they wake up to bloom in the spring, after winter passes. I like this poem. Nicely written. Thanks
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
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You are so welcome
Comment from sammielwf
Mystery Writer,
Such a beautiful photo to accent the lines to your nature poem. I like the image of : bare trees sleep.
Nice job with this poem.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Mystery Writer,
Such a beautiful photo to accent the lines to your nature poem. I like the image of : bare trees sleep.
Nice job with this poem.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Vanna1
Beautiful picture, those blossoms are quite a sight. You followed the instructions well. I like your theme. Your words sound nice together. Good luck and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Beautiful picture, those blossoms are quite a sight. You followed the instructions well. I like your theme. Your words sound nice together. Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your great review.
