Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

Your use of personification will draw the reader in. It is as if the sun and stars have an agreement. There is no power struggle evident. It is just a smooth transition. This could serve as a strong metaphor. Well thought out. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thank you for the very positive review, and of course your vote.

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

I never thought about sunlight leaving behind a gift for the stars. I think you would have a good children's book if you wrote a story about the sky leaving a gift for the stars because the stars give it something to look at.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thanks for your review. The book idea sounds intriguing.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello I'm anonymous,

Beautiful entry for the Nature 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Lovely nature imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Interesting, I thought you were speaking of the wild fires in California. Very clever, you did a great job expressing this in your poem. The picture added to your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

And what a beautiful and stunning prize it is -- wonderful vision here! ;) Thanx for sharing your take on this limited format and best of luck at the polls today! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Cynthia Adams1

Excellent

Really nice 3-5-3 poem and really gorgeous artwork.
This certainly seems to me to be a winner in the contest.
I can't think of anything to add or subtract to make it better.
If six stars were available for me to give you, I would.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thank you for the very positive review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the idea of the sunlight
leaving the prize "for the stars."
-Well done; good luck.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Nov-2020

You are quite welcome.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

The image color is wonderful and also are the words in your poem. I have been pondering on the sky; is it on fire? It reminds me of the Colorado and California fires.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thanks for your review. Desert sunsets are said to be awesome.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest on nature.
Very good description of the skies and sunlight.
Nice addition of the rhyme skies/prize,
and use of alliteration of the "s" words.
Perfect picture match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert


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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thanks for the very positive feedback