Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is a fun poem. It sounds like the question a child would ask. The reader is invited to return to their childhood wonderings. Children do know simply what color the wind is. the answers are probably as varied as a box of crayons.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

yes! i think its maybe first grade level. and adults might have fun with it too

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Hey! Way to get the imagination flowing this morning... I'm going with yellow this morning - lol! ;) Thanx for sharing your take on this limited format and best of luck at the polls today! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

thank you, thank you, Ill go with yellow too!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent speculative 3-5-3 poem for the contest
on nature. The wind is one of the wonders of nature.
Nice touch with the two rhymes.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

thank you so much

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I truly think this poem will appeal to young readers because (1) it asks and answers a question many children ask, (2) it has rhyme which children love, and (3) it is short and uses everyday language. Rod

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

i hope it is appreciated by adults too!

reply by RodG on 02-Nov-2020

Indeed it will likely have universal appeal to all ages.

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

thank you! agree though, it is nice for children