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Comment from humpwhistle
I'm not sure if this qualifies as a haiku--it certainly isn't traditional. The 3-line syllable count isn't the only requisition for the haiku form. Traditional haiku are about nature, and must include a kogi.
Having said that, I hope you're right about Trump's voters bailing.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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I'm not sure if this qualifies as a haiku--it certainly isn't traditional. The 3-line syllable count isn't the only requisition for the haiku form. Traditional haiku are about nature, and must include a kogi.
Having said that, I hope you're right about Trump's voters bailing.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Yes, a Senryu is usually about Human nature and Haiku is usually about nature. I figured combination of a Human's nature represented in a Nature's object would be ok, especially with the Halloween season. Thank you for Reading, Rating and the Time to Review this poem offering.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, the outcome of the election is not out yet is it? You created a vivid image here with your Haiku, I am waiting to hear the news and hope that it is good, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Oh dear, the outcome of the election is not out yet is it? You created a vivid image here with your Haiku, I am waiting to hear the news and hope that it is good, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate and Review this poem offering. A little borderline on the technical definition of a Haiku, but I incorporate a Nature element. With the seasonal pumpkin. Thanks Again.