Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Historical Take down"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
12 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
That poor kid! I'm glad she took that freak out of the world, but what happens to her now? And whatever happens to the survivor, it will be too good for him. I hope he spends what's left of his life in prison getting some of what he deserves. I understand his sort don't do too well in jail.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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That poor kid! I'm glad she took that freak out of the world, but what happens to her now? And whatever happens to the survivor, it will be too good for him. I hope he spends what's left of his life in prison getting some of what he deserves. I understand his sort don't do too well in jail.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for all your support. It's always greatly appreciated. All the survivors will need extensive therapy for sure. I've heard that too, that baby rapers don't fair well in prison. I hope they give it to him good every day for the rest of his miserable life. That still isn't enough.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great story with a successful and happy ending. It is always good to read about heroes saving the day. You did a splendid job with this writing!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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This is a great story with a successful and happy ending. It is always good to read about heroes saving the day. You did a splendid job with this writing!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a kind, encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. It is nice to see the good guys win for a change.
Thank you again for all your support and friendship. It always means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Mia Twysted
So intense. I was at the edge of my seat, and it wasn't because my dog jumpeed up and decided to sit behind me in my desk chair. I felt as if I was right there beside her the whole time as she made her way through the house. It was great.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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So intense. I was at the edge of my seat, and it wasn't because my dog jumpeed up and decided to sit behind me in my desk chair. I felt as if I was right there beside her the whole time as she made her way through the house. It was great.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a fantastic review. I am honored you think it deserves such high marks and fantastic comment, feeling like you was with her. That means the world to me.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This was very realistic. The ending is typical with the red tape as to when the kids can just go home. They probably have to do a debriefing of everyone and interview them. I know the more they learn, the better. But these kid just want to go home. Well, played out. I like how you gave one of the kids a sense of power to feel they did something to take back their power. Good job. Oh, I just read that another occasion for more abductions is hunting season. It makes sense since they said it was when a group of a lot of men come together.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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This was very realistic. The ending is typical with the red tape as to when the kids can just go home. They probably have to do a debriefing of everyone and interview them. I know the more they learn, the better. But these kid just want to go home. Well, played out. I like how you gave one of the kids a sense of power to feel they did something to take back their power. Good job. Oh, I just read that another occasion for more abductions is hunting season. It makes sense since they said it was when a group of a lot of men come together.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad it seemed realistic, believable to you. Hopefully the officers will be quick. I'm sure in the children's eyes it won't be fast enough.
Thank you again for such a kind review. All your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mistydawn.
You narrated the police actions really well. Being there is one place where I got a little confused about which officers were being discussed:
"We are." Pointing to a group of officers he continues, "You guys cover the outside. The rest of you follow me."
In this section you might want to separate the two "you" groups identify them to a unit or something that distinguishes the one "you" from the other.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Hello Mistydawn.
You narrated the police actions really well. Being there is one place where I got a little confused about which officers were being discussed:
"We are." Pointing to a group of officers he continues, "You guys cover the outside. The rest of you follow me."
In this section you might want to separate the two "you" groups identify them to a unit or something that distinguishes the one "you" from the other.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review and your suggestion. I've changed the sentence to this, does it help clear the confusion? Pointing to a few of his agents he continues, "You guys, Jamal I want you to cover the outside. The rest of you follow me."
Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship. It's always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I'm hoping you had a Happy Halloween with no werewolves or vampires that couldn't take off their masks. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Well, I'm hoping you had a Happy Halloween with no werewolves or vampires that couldn't take off their masks. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and such a marvelous review. I had a nice, incident free Halloween. Me, my black cats and all my little pretties hehehehe. Just kidding. I watched scary movies all night, pigged out on recess a nice treat.
Thank you again for such a fantastic review. All your support, encouragement and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Sugarray77
You have a knack, Misty, of grabbing the attention of the reader and keeping it til the very end. Superb job of keeping the tension high, believable situations, and good dialogue. So well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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You have a knack, Misty, of grabbing the attention of the reader and keeping it til the very end. Superb job of keeping the tension high, believable situations, and good dialogue. So well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Than you so much for such a kind, encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, found it realistic. Now I need to save Anna from her heartache. The poor dear has been crying for over a week.
Thank you again for all your wonderful encouragement, support and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, this is as tense a chapter as they come. I loved it. It's full of action, but the only thing is the tragic theme. How can anyone do what has been done to those poor girls? It's beyond me. Now on to the next chapter. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Hi Misty, this is as tense a chapter as they come. I loved it. It's full of action, but the only thing is the tragic theme. How can anyone do what has been done to those poor girls? It's beyond me. Now on to the next chapter. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a marvelous review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the suspense. Whoever does this must be heartless with the devil in their soul.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from royowen
I'm so glad the police are on this case, it is comforting to know. This business, like drugs is very much in vogue throughout the world. How horrible for parents, those of us who adore our kids are so incensed by these things, well done, wonderfully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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I'm so glad the police are on this case, it is comforting to know. This business, like drugs is very much in vogue throughout the world. How horrible for parents, those of us who adore our kids are so incensed by these things, well done, wonderfully written my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for such a kind review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It is nice to see, hear about a win for the good guys. It gives us hope. I'm hoping more people will feel outraged like you, open their eyes, look around, speak out when something doesn't seem right, educate their kids, teach them ways to get away. Put a stop to this God-awful nightmare.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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Most welcome
Comment from BethShelby
This was a very exciting chapter. You seem to know how a police raid like that would go. I'm glad they have the pervert. This is excellent writing and I'm wondering what will happen next. I look forward to reading more. These children who have been so abused won't get over this easily.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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This was a very exciting chapter. You seem to know how a police raid like that would go. I'm glad they have the pervert. This is excellent writing and I'm wondering what will happen next. I look forward to reading more. These children who have been so abused won't get over this easily.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and for your kind comment. I watch a lot of police shows, Law and Order and Chicago PD are my favorite. This is just the beginning. The vigilante is far from done. Yes, the children will need extensive therapy for years to come.
Thank you again for such a kind review. All your support, encouragement and friendship, take care.
