Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A lovely reminder for us all! ;) A wonderfully uplifting offering for the contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! :) ;)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

And thanks for an inspiring review zanya

Comment from angel123

Good

I like your spiritual poem of faith and I enjoyed reading it. It is uplifting but your format is not right. First line 5 syllables, second 7, third 5. You centered your poem that is why the format is off. Change it before voting ends and you should be alright. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thanks for reading and commentary - much appreciated zanya

Comment from Rosemary wanjiru

Excellent

Wow, I love the way different themes are intertwined. It's so poetic and inspirational. Great job. So touching. It gives me hope. Nice photo too and smooth flow of words

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Great review zanya

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is really well done with the picture complienting your write perfectly. It wasn't what I expected but it is well done. Best to you in the writing prompt 5-7-5 faith contest.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020

Thanks for a superb review zanya