Haiku(howling winds echo)
Classic Haiku9 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I prefer to read poetry aloud. This poem was very fun to read because of all of the alliteration.The alliteration becomes onomatopoetic. The s's effect the sounds of the wind going across some of the single leaves left on the bare branches. This is a strong sensory poem. Well written.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I prefer to read poetry aloud. This poem was very fun to read because of all of the alliteration.The alliteration becomes onomatopoetic. The s's effect the sounds of the wind going across some of the single leaves left on the bare branches. This is a strong sensory poem. Well written.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Excellent review zanya
Comment from Rosemary wanjiru
Beautiful, sensational. Well written. I love it. The imagery matches so well with the words. And it's poetic and musical. Nice job. You nailed it.Good luck in the contest and all the best
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Beautiful, sensational. Well written. I love it. The imagery matches so well with the words. And it's poetic and musical. Nice job. You nailed it.Good luck in the contest and all the best
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
Comment from Ulla
Hi Zanya, absolutely. It is a classic haiku and I loved it. It is very well written and the imagery is outstanding. I especially liked the satori line. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hi Zanya, absolutely. It is a classic haiku and I loved it. It is very well written and the imagery is outstanding. I especially liked the satori line. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Zanya,
Great entry for my classic haiku contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You fulfilled the contest's rules. It has lovely imagery of the winter scene. Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Hello, Zanya,
Great entry for my classic haiku contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You fulfilled the contest's rules. It has lovely imagery of the winter scene. Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from juliaSjames
A very chilly write. Creates a bleak atmosphere of winter outdoors.
To avoid too many apostrophes suggest you switch
"forest's leafless trees",to
"leafless forest trees"
For the satori, perhaps something more operatic to correspond with "echo", for example
"winter's aria"
Good luck
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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A very chilly write. Creates a bleak atmosphere of winter outdoors.
To avoid too many apostrophes suggest you switch
"forest's leafless trees",to
"leafless forest trees"
For the satori, perhaps something more operatic to correspond with "echo", for example
"winter's aria"
Good luck
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent verse, Zanya! You did a perfect job in crafting a classic Haiku. Love your satori!! I would mention that forests is possessive... needs an apostrophe. Hugs!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Excellent verse, Zanya! You did a perfect job in crafting a classic Haiku. Love your satori!! I would mention that forests is possessive... needs an apostrophe. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review and thks for spags reminder ! zanya
Comment from Cindy Decker
I like this Haiku very much.
The winds can be frightening for some; for others it is a cheerful serenade. I like the image I see and the sound I hear when reading this poem.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I like this Haiku very much.
The winds can be frightening for some; for others it is a cheerful serenade. I like the image I see and the sound I hear when reading this poem.
Excellent work.
Good luck in the contest,
Cindy
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The leafless trees do create a venue where the wind would howl and your presentation of this awesome picture with your well-chosen words is a stellar example of that premise.
Ralf
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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The leafless trees do create a venue where the wind would howl and your presentation of this awesome picture with your well-chosen words is a stellar example of that premise.
Ralf
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very descriptive haiku. It is that time of year. I heard those howling winds last night. This is good entry for the Classic Haiku contest. I like the picture but I dread the cold. Good luck.
Beth
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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This is a very descriptive haiku. It is that time of year. I heard those howling winds last night. This is good entry for the Classic Haiku contest. I like the picture but I dread the cold. Good luck.
Beth
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
