BB BATS: Four Flavors of Yum!
Oh, those little taffy pops of childhood...19 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Now ... I consider myself a connoisseur of candy - especially the kind that stick's to one's teeth, and I have NEVER heard of BBBATS! Woah! How can this be? I'll have be on the lookout ... even if they would probably pull out some fillings at this stage!
Loved your offering!
Best wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Now ... I consider myself a connoisseur of candy - especially the kind that stick's to one's teeth, and I have NEVER heard of BBBATS! Woah! How can this be? I'll have be on the lookout ... even if they would probably pull out some fillings at this stage!
Loved your offering!
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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You know, I can remember they were beginning to 'shrink' in size when I was in high school... no telling how 'big' they are now - lol! Marketing... sigh! ;) Thanks so much for the review, my lady! Take care!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A Very well-written 5-7-5 Sweet stack about the sticky toffees we like to eat during our childhood while our teeth was healthy and fixed in our mouths, now it is a fight between the toffee and the dentures.
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A Very well-written 5-7-5 Sweet stack about the sticky toffees we like to eat during our childhood while our teeth was healthy and fixed in our mouths, now it is a fight between the toffee and the dentures.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Rosemary wanjiru
Great poem. Brief and to the point. Full of flavour too. It brings back childhood memories Smooth flow if words. Simple use of grammar. Proper punctuation. I love just love it
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Great poem. Brief and to the point. Full of flavour too. It brings back childhood memories Smooth flow if words. Simple use of grammar. Proper punctuation. I love just love it
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This year say good bye to this treat, because the Halloween was cancelled this year. Sweets, no sweets, life most go on:) so you can dress for success and here you go have yourself a party with candies and all the sweets you can eat. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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This year say good bye to this treat, because the Halloween was cancelled this year. Sweets, no sweets, life most go on:) so you can dress for success and here you go have yourself a party with candies and all the sweets you can eat. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I recall a taffy candy in the same flavors--don't remember as B B B Bats but must be same sure looks like it--this bit of whimsy brings me back to the nickel days! Good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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I recall a taffy candy in the same flavors--don't remember as B B B Bats but must be same sure looks like it--this bit of whimsy brings me back to the nickel days! Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
New heard of these sweets before and they are obviously close to your heart and memory, they sound like they would be lethal for our teeth! A fun write, love Dolly x
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New heard of these sweets before and they are obviously close to your heart and memory, they sound like they would be lethal for our teeth! A fun write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Eternal Muse
You really appeased my sweet tooth with this wonderful poem! What a profusion of sweets which makes your mouth water. All your choices are good, and I admired your artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in that sweet contest (smile).
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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You really appeased my sweet tooth with this wonderful poem! What a profusion of sweets which makes your mouth water. All your choices are good, and I admired your artistic presentation and artwork.
Good luck in that sweet contest (smile).
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Elizabeth McCombs
This was very cute, and as someone who also consumed those candy's as a child, very nostalgic. You really captured the feeling of biting into those treats. Especially the last, because of course banana was the best!
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This was very cute, and as someone who also consumed those candy's as a child, very nostalgic. You really captured the feeling of biting into those treats. Especially the last, because of course banana was the best!
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much, Elizabeth!
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. I like seventh syllable rhyme you decided to add in there. You didn't have to do that but I think doing so added a degree of difficulty the voters should consider in your favor.
Well crafted.
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Very nice. I like seventh syllable rhyme you decided to add in there. You didn't have to do that but I think doing so added a degree of difficulty the voters should consider in your favor.
Well crafted.
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much, lancellot!
