They're Still Your Neighbors
Don't be blinded by the current chaotic messaging...21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about accepting your neighbors for who and what they are even if they get noisy sometimes or make you crazy mad.
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A very well-written Naani about accepting your neighbors for who and what they are even if they get noisy sometimes or make you crazy mad.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, interesting, have a message and are
creative. The words and title of this poem gives a reminder! The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great day!
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The author's words are clear, interesting, have a message and are
creative. The words and title of this poem gives a reminder! The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your time and your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like how you present
the situation going on
in various neighborhoods
everywhere, and then
suggesting taking a "step
back" to try and understand.
-Sometimes that is easier than others.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Good artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-I like how you present
the situation going on
in various neighborhoods
everywhere, and then
suggesting taking a "step
back" to try and understand.
-Sometimes that is easier than others.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your time and your comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
Hey. Remember me? It's time to take pause and reflect. To live in neighbourhoods should remind people to be neighbourly, instead of being caught up in adversity. Your poem is a good reminder about what matters.
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Hey. Remember me? It's time to take pause and reflect. To live in neighbourhoods should remind people to be neighbourly, instead of being caught up in adversity. Your poem is a good reminder about what matters.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your time and your comments.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"They're Still Your Neighbours", is short, succinct, and entertaining. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
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"They're Still Your Neighbours", is short, succinct, and entertaining. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your time and your comments.
You're very welcome.
Comment from amada
Your Naani poem you wrote here it has the brightness of those old years. I remember it was a big fat night for my kids to go out, come back tires and happy. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Your Naani poem you wrote here it has the brightness of those old years. I remember it was a big fat night for my kids to go out, come back tires and happy. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your time and your comments!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Powerful and fresh--alliteration--awash/adversity--stop/step--startling pairing of cringe/adversity--fine work in this intriguing form--never heard of it.
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Powerful and fresh--alliteration--awash/adversity--stop/step--startling pairing of cringe/adversity--fine work in this intriguing form--never heard of it.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your time and your comments!
Comment from Gloria ....
Couldn't agree more. It isn't nearly as bad or as chaotic as it appears over the airwaves. If we remember the golden rule we should be fine.
Excellent and timely entry into this contest and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
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Couldn't agree more. It isn't nearly as bad or as chaotic as it appears over the airwaves. If we remember the golden rule we should be fine.
Excellent and timely entry into this contest and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your time and your review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
On the national news I recently saw a "human interest" story about a Democrat and a Republican traveling the country together in an effort to show that unity is possible! I was amazed. Yes, the current chaos in politics has affected relationships.
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On the national news I recently saw a "human interest" story about a Democrat and a Republican traveling the country together in an effort to show that unity is possible! I was amazed. Yes, the current chaos in politics has affected relationships.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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So very, very much.... hope 😒 Thanks for your time and your wonderful comments!
Comment from phil nelson
Although I was never familiar with this form of poetry before I believe you have not only satisfied the requirements perfectly but also given the reader great imagery to ponder Very well done and best of luck in the contest
All the Best
Phil
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Although I was never familiar with this form of poetry before I believe you have not only satisfied the requirements perfectly but also given the reader great imagery to ponder Very well done and best of luck in the contest
All the Best
Phil
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your time and your wonderful comments!
