Childhood Heaven
Sweet 5,7,513 total reviews
Comment from Edward Escobar
How I would like to weep, when I stare at all those selection of candy's that
easily turn this old man feeling like a young boy in his runaway imagination. Most of them I recognize, tasted. How well you have done to put this image and words to create such a wonderful memory, for me at least. Thanks for sharing.
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How I would like to weep, when I stare at all those selection of candy's that
easily turn this old man feeling like a young boy in his runaway imagination. Most of them I recognize, tasted. How well you have done to put this image and words to create such a wonderful memory, for me at least. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Fun and clever about the childhood of candy store delights.
My aunt occasionally took me to a candy store on our Sunday rides.
Stores I never knew existed to this poem brought back those memories.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
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Fun and clever about the childhood of candy store delights.
My aunt occasionally took me to a candy store on our Sunday rides.
Stores I never knew existed to this poem brought back those memories.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
Comment from equestrik
Super good picture for this 5-7-5 Sweet stack writing prompt entry. This would definitely be a perfect sho for anyone with a sweet tooth. You poem went well with it as well.
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Super good picture for this 5-7-5 Sweet stack writing prompt entry. This would definitely be a perfect sho for anyone with a sweet tooth. You poem went well with it as well.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
