Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "There, A Bit of Magic Hides"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
28 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, There a Bit of Magic Hides, has the proper formatting and fits right in as the rainbow scene carries on into a magical bent.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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This 5-7-5, There a Bit of Magic Hides, has the proper formatting and fits right in as the rainbow scene carries on into a magical bent.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Bill! ;) Have an awesome week ahead, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette,
I like your refreshing (nature) poem and the image i see from your words. The rainbow and leprechaun are legend, and a babbling brook sighs, is a really nice sound the reader can hear if she is still for just a moment.
Beautiful poem, Yvette.
Best wishes.â??ï¸?ð??»
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Yvette,
I like your refreshing (nature) poem and the image i see from your words. The rainbow and leprechaun are legend, and a babbling brook sighs, is a really nice sound the reader can hear if she is still for just a moment.
Beautiful poem, Yvette.
Best wishes.â??ï¸?ð??»
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Cindy! ;) Have an awesome week out there, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a Haiku that is full of meaning. I have to read it multiple times and still try to sink in. Leprechaun thinks Rainbow is a treasure. I'm not sure why "babbling brook" sighs, but it is a very lively poem, full of actions in 17 syllables.
Fun and beautiful as usual.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This is a Haiku that is full of meaning. I have to read it multiple times and still try to sink in. Leprechaun thinks Rainbow is a treasure. I'm not sure why "babbling brook" sighs, but it is a very lively poem, full of actions in 17 syllables.
Fun and beautiful as usual.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Lisa -- love to see just what we can make happen in those limited syllables - lol!! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
This was great Yvette. Anytime someone mentions magic (dragons, fairies, unicorns, dogs and cats) it catches my eye. The picture choice wonderfully matched your words, giving a sense of mystical, magical, peace, serenity and happiness. Awww the wee folk are truly there, just not seen by you or me.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This was great Yvette. Anytime someone mentions magic (dragons, fairies, unicorns, dogs and cats) it catches my eye. The picture choice wonderfully matched your words, giving a sense of mystical, magical, peace, serenity and happiness. Awww the wee folk are truly there, just not seen by you or me.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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You are so right, Alie.... although I guess when we start seeing them, we might worry...? ;) :)Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, my lady and have an awesome weekend!! ;) Yvette
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You are so welcome Yvette, you as well have a great weekend, Happy Halloween.
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You are so welcome Yvette, you as well have a great weekend, Happy Halloween.
Comment from Bichon
This was a great poem that really made me smile! Although I live in Ireland I've never seen a leprechaun before! Perhaps I will look near a babbling brook in the future, might have some luck. :)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This was a great poem that really made me smile! Although I live in Ireland I've never seen a leprechaun before! Perhaps I will look near a babbling brook in the future, might have some luck. :)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I'm guessing you have but you just didn't realize it... I have it on good authority that there are quite a number of them over there...! ;) :) :) Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Chloe! ;) Have an awesome weekend, Beautiful Girl!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the wise leprechaun who outsmarted everybody who was looking for the pot of gold at the rainbow's end right beside the babbling brook.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the wise leprechaun who outsmarted everybody who was looking for the pot of gold at the rainbow's end right beside the babbling brook.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Sandra! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is the first time I've actually seen this, and think it's a wonderful idea. I'm no good at 5-7-5s though. You have followed on from the previous couplet perfectly, Yvette, the rainbow being the link. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This is the first time I've actually seen this, and think it's a wonderful idea. I'm no good at 5-7-5s though. You have followed on from the previous couplet perfectly, Yvette, the rainbow being the link. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Sooo, we should look to see you in the mix soon...? ;) :) :) Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Sandra! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for joining this book, Yvette! I enjoyed your leprechaun addition. I see you were inspired by June's rainbow lines and you added more to the picture!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you for joining this book, Yvette! I enjoyed your leprechaun addition. I see you were inspired by June's rainbow lines and you added more to the picture!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Helen -- love the short ones on crazy days! ;) Have an awesome weekend, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear yvette, Your contribution to this Regena is lovely and carries the reader to the end of the rainbow hoping to find the leprechauns treasure. From there, anything can happen.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Dear yvette, Your contribution to this Regena is lovely and carries the reader to the end of the rainbow hoping to find the leprechauns treasure. From there, anything can happen.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Well, I'll take any treasure at this point, Suzanna - lol!! ;) :) Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, my lady! ;) Have an awesome weekend!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
Your Leprechaun is smiling because he has found a safe spot to hide his treasure at the end of the rainbow. Maybe you could have him tell me where that is...you think?
Robert
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Hello Yvette.
Your Leprechaun is smiling because he has found a safe spot to hide his treasure at the end of the rainbow. Maybe you could have him tell me where that is...you think?
Robert
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Maybe he is and maybe it's something else he's hidden, yes? :) ;) ;) Thanx for the wonderful review on this shortie, Z! ;) Have an awesome weekend, Z!! ;) Yvette
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Hello Yvette.
Right now I'm just interested in the gold, some power, and getting the internet back. If he's got that, send him over.
Z (°π°). (me eating pie) hahahaha